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Crazy Little Thing Called Love (Poem)
What is this feeling I couldn't resist, When you’re around I couldn’t insist, Depriving myself is engraving the pain, Ignoring the feeling is regretting everything. My heart is throbbing, my brain is cracking, My eyes are glowing, my lips are parting, The world is revolving, but with you it’s stopping, Is this crazy little thing called love? To not to look at you is the thing I couldn’t do, To not to talk to you is a failure which I couldn’t undo, My mouth is shut and my heart is trapped, Is this crazy little thing called love? But everything just fade, when your goodbye is time to bid, To break the promise you swear, is a step you shouldn’t dare, The love you have ingrain, will now be waiting in vain, Is this crazy little thing called love? How could I pretend, that life with you couldn’t extend, How could I ignore, the fact that you are going to soar, How could I let you go, if all I wanted is to be with you, How could you reassure, the pain without you I need to endure. *Is this crazy little thing called love? ❤* I'm not sure if this is good enough, but I want to submit this as an entry to @**Ebuzzydagr8** poem writing contest. Best of luck..haha Here's the link of the contest. https://read.cash/@Ebuzzydagr8/writing-contest-poems-d96cb0ca
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cheers to your nice poem :) Did you watched the movie with the same title of your poem?ahaha
Yes. Nam and Shane.. I love that Thai movie so much..
Me too. That's one of my favorite :)
I've watched it more than once..haha
wow. I just watched it for 2 times I think
Who knew you could write poems 😂 it's a bit too naive for my liking but it's nice
Yeah I know that.. your style is like Stephen King..haha
Stephen king is ❤ after all >w< i wish you would join this community event I've been working on
They have? Why not try
https://read.cash/@Macronald/keeping-up-with-the-vibes-c6404d75 I've become co moderator for a community so i was hoping you would join in the fun
Sure..
Just hoping 👉👈🥺
Btw, I don't think I will join at macroland's contest, 3 articles minimum.. wow..haha..
Nice poems.Tahanks!
Very inspiring, share more my friend.hihi😘
Haha.. it's hard to make poem, that one is a bit lame
No my friend it's good.hehehe astiggg.
Ahhhh nosebleed.
Want tissue? Haha
Bimpo na hahaha
Haha.. sure my towel ako dto. 😂
Ay naku. Hahaha
😂😂
Reminds me of the Song *Crazy Little Thing Called love*. 😌😊
Yes there is.. and a thai movie
Nice poetry almost like the song itself
Haha..really? Have you watch the movie.with the same.title as that? There's also an old song crazy little thing called love
Nice one sis. Yes that crazy little called Love can do a lot of things it can make or break someone.
Thanks for reading..I love the thai movie with the same title.as that..
I love reading your articles actually. Coz most of your articles I can relate and learn new things.
Thank you.. I really like making articles which will be helpful and informative to many.. I even want those debunking, revealing, a not so common information to many..
Would also want to write articles its just that everytime I try to write one so many inputs that I couldnt even know where to start. Plus I find it more interesting to interact or do such comments than writing my own article. 😂 Mapangcomment lang peg. 😂
But you'll earn more through writing though.. and i can tell from your comments that your english skills is good...for sure you can make quality articles
Will try maybe one of these days. Maybe I needed more inspiration so I can write a good one. 😊
Your kids and family..hehe..
They say love is blind. But you are seeing it in someone's eyes. Through love know no barrier thanks.
Haha.. it's just a saying that love is blind.. though it happens sometimes in real life
Love is crazy bit beautiful
Haha.. yes it is.. it will make you crazy if you invest in it too much..
Very nice! You are romantic person
Haha.not really.. thanks for reading
Love hurts when gone
So don't ever love too much.. lol
I am pretty sure that love is made out of crazy littel things,
🤗🤗 starting from small crazy things then will grow fonder and turn into love.