Come on

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4 years ago

Hi everyone! How are you?

I hope that everyone is fine by the grace of Allah. I'm also fine.

It's me @Jakir once again with poem which is written by me. This poem was written two months ago.This is also my favourite poem. The name of poem is come on.

When I am free I sometimes sit down to write poetry, because I like to write.❀️

Now read start,,,

..."Poem"...

If there is a void in the middle of the chest,

If the face floats in the warmth of the heart,

please come on.

Come to the porch of my south door!

Although there are no bed couches, the straw house,

Even in the hot sun, the wind will blow!

If you feel lonely thinking of the old days,

If the cause causes tension in the chest,

please come on.

Come on in, take a look and enjoy yourself!

Although modern life does not have the tools, I can still give you,

The cold water of the lotus pond and the fresh vegetables of the field!

If I remember to live, If remorse bites the conscience,

Please come on.

Come on, cut the thread of the magic net!

Although I can't make up for lost time,

Yet I will awaken love,

Life is not too long,

I will hug you again.πŸ’•

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Your poem writing quality is really so good...Thanks for sharing with us...I am waiting for your next poem..keep writing and keep sharing

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4 years ago

Thank you so much dear for liked my poem. As always you appreciate to me so of course I will come again with new poem.😍😍

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4 years ago

nice poem we want too see more😍

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4 years ago

Thank you so much for appreciate to me. I will come back with new poem😌😍

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4 years ago

i loved your way of writing... who can ignore such calls that is generated inside heart...if one loves you whatever your condition is he/she is to come to you..."cold water of lotus pond" one of the magical words in the poem...it touches the heart of a nature lover..πŸ’•

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4 years ago

Thank you so much dear for your valuable comment. 😍😍 I'm really appreciate of this. I will come back with new poem again. Just connected with me.😊

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4 years ago

This is my one of favourite poem dear😊 Thank you so much dear for your valuable comment. I'm inspired of your comment.πŸ’•

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4 years ago

that's a great honour for me to inspire someone specially when he's a poet..

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4 years ago

Your poem has become very beautiful, brother. You can write really good poems. Thank you so much for presenting this poem so beautifully. And the meanings of this poem are actually very valuable and on Very beautiful. I am very happy to read your poem. I like your poem very much. You can write very beautiful poems, brother. Writing poetry in English is a very word matter. But you are very beautiful Presented the poem. The meaning of the poem is really very exciting.

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4 years ago

Dear, as always you inspiration me I'm really happy for that. Thank you so much for your valuable comment. And also you are good Photographer, you are good writer. Also Your every article is very very helpful dear.😍❀️

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4 years ago

This some kinda poem that I will rate for B. For some reason that you might know as well.

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4 years ago

I will try better of next time. Thank you so much dear😍☺️

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4 years ago

wow amazing and beautiful poem i like it very much great and wonderful words in poem Your poem is very well written. I liked it very much and I hope you will write more such poems and work hard. I will be happy to read them.

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4 years ago

Thank you so much for your valuable comment. Again thanks for appreciate to me.....so that I'm really very happy.

So, I will come back with new poem agaim as soon ..😍

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4 years ago

❀️❀️❀️

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4 years ago

πŸ˜β€οΈπŸ’•

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