@Iremori
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Glass
When it's whole It's beautiful for the eyes to see Without blemish It's as pure as it can be Some cover it with used **gazettes** To preserve its beauty They put it on their homes and shelves Just because it looks pretty But when it cracks It loses its value So you paint them with colors Just to make it look new Glass is fragile Just like you and me We're pure and innocent But we have our own fragility When we break We put our pieces back again Making **grotesque** art works Just to get back up again We put **garlands** Where they don't belong Just to gain acceptance And so we can tag along But I say You've done enough Just stay here And we can have a laugh As you put your pieces Back from where they belong Leave the cracks and marks As they really are Don't cover up All your scars Those make up Who you are You're beautiful inside I know you were You should keep your facade Just be who you really are
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Sana all talaga sensei haha Galing talaga ng works mo uwu 😍 Nag aabang lang ako haha
Thanks, yung sayo din naman. Let's say yours are the brighter ones. And mine is on the darker side hahaha
Hmmmm pwede hahaha.
Naaalala ko nung nakitawag nakitawag na din kayo na Sensei sakin hahaha, not that I hate it, nabigla lang ako nun haha. I'll always be thankful that you guys are my friends. SML hahaha
Yieeehhh yun kasi tawag nila sayo dati hahaha syempre since shs man lang naging magkaklase haha. Ka gaan lang na tawagin kang sensei hahaha
Yep haha, thanks for being one of the few friends that I have haha
You're welcome hehe. Ohh thanks for the upvote hehe di ko inexpect yun ah hahaha if you need someone to talk to dito man lang ako/kami.
Yep haha, I'll try to talk to you guys, nasanay na rin kasi ako na solo haha
Good hehe
"Covering it with gazzetes" a very filipino way of protecting fragile potteries right? Then you applied it to real life, the fragility of a person. Nice work!😊❤
Yep haha, some even keep it covered even after it's already set up. Maybe for protection against the sharp edges, I guess? Thanks for the compliment! ❤️
Also used in packaging like for my favorite dried fish "tinapa" 😂 . Sometimes I read the torn up gazette used as the packaging. Idk why, it's just I feel I shoulda read it. Weird tho hahahaha
Yep haha, makes you a bit curious why they wanted to get rid of it hahaha
How to be you dear? You can easily make these poems. You even used the prompt words for the 2nd time haha
Thanks for the compliment. If you guys want, I can write an article about how I write my works.
That would be interesting. Go and do that. It might Inspire others
Later then haha
I'll be waiting for that bro
Ow, May I ask if what/who makes you fragile? 🤔
Hmm, well, if I have to answer, that would be myself. Because I'm the one who makes everything harder that it actually is and I'm the one who sets what I can and can't do so I tend to give up part way through. Just being in that state makes me fragile that even with just a simple poke or shake, I'll break
Ironically. I wish someday you will not arrive at same judgement. Don't think that yourself is the reason what makes you fragile. Okay? 😇 Keep always see the brighter side of yourself. Coz you yourself keeps it tougher and stronger. Btw. Nice poem prompt writing. 😉
Well, that'll be hard since I'm already used to this haha
Nice article dear.