Don't touch what's mine
This is my last entry to **@Jdine** 's Contest that should be posted in ****Thriller/Horror Stories (dc61)**** https://read.cash/@Jdine https://read.cash/c/thrillerhorror-stories-dc61 For the details on that contest, you could check here **https://read.cash/@Jdine/birth-month-giveaway-d289b904** **Include 3 or more word prompts in your article. (DREAM, TWISTED, SILENT, DARK, TERRIFY, COLD)** Starto! It's inevitable for me to pass by the old mansion by my street. There was a sort of stillness and **silence** that surrounded that house. I never went in there again after that incident... It was a few years back but I could still remember it clearly. I even thought it was a **dream** at first but I was gravely mistaken. I knew it wasn't a dream because I could still feel her rage filled gaze whenever I passed by that house. I remember following this little girl inside the house. She was a peculiar girl, always carried a journal around with her. I was more fascinated with the journal than her thus why I befriended her. Such a mistake that was. As days passed, I started to see her grow more **twisted**. She still hugged the journal close to her though, and every time I went near the book, her expressions grew **dark**, as if all her secrets were inside. Those secrets really fascinated me. I did everything I could to get that journal, even to the point of sneaking into the mansion at the **cold** of the night. I never expected to do this but my curiosity was getting to me, it was making me restless. I trailed off to where she said her room was. It was empty though... but that journal was there, on the bedside table. I was just reaching for it when I heard a voice "I knew you would betray me too" There she stood by the door, a pained expression on her face as she held a pair of scissors tight in her small grasp. I accidentally dropped the journal upon seeing her, and I couldn't tell what **terrified** me more, the girl that was inching towards me or the opened pages that showed the most brutal of photographs, those of adults, her parents. I presumed? mutilated in the most unbelievable of ways. I didn't have time to process anything and just simply made a run for it. She screamed and ran after me, she kept telling me "never again touch what's mine!" I had managed to escape the house but later on, I realized, I could never escape her. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PJeNXd0SZNc&feature=emb_title This is the timer that I used, I wrote at 9:05, ended at 9:15. I typed on laptop and didn't edit anymore,just corrected my typos and highlighted the prompt words
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Good article..... I like how explain this.... And waiting for your next nice article..... Thanks a lot ☺☺.... I know you will be successful in future.
Thank you but I'll be back to my usual content tomorrow. I just wanted to use up my contest entries and keep writing horror 😂
good article brother keep it up
I'm female.... but thank you!
ohh sry dear i am confused 😂
Maybe because of my name but i get that a lot so it's alright ^-^
thanks dear😘
have you shared this link already in the giveaway article?
Oh, i forgot
haha that's okay I included it in the list anyways haha.. But it would be great so that others will be aware of your article. :)
I already added it ^-^ still a while before the deadline but i wanted to get back to my usual stuff
ahahha.. This can be one of your usual stuffs. You're really good in writing in this genre... :)
Ehh? I was told my writing was diverse enough to cover a lot? But I'll think about it. I still love my researches though
Yeah and this is one of the diversities. That I can say for sure. hehe
Aww thank you. Maybe next time I'll try out a fantasy one, although i already made a fantasy one and posted it here before
hmmm... that sounds interesting . OR you can do both genre in one article. fantasy horror kinda story. Vampires stuffs like Van Helsing kinda story. haha
If it's supernatural themed ones... i think i can only do angst for that. I don't find them scary anymore so i don't think I'll ever be able to justify using vampires and wolves as something that makes one scared
hmmmm yeah... actually it became cute because of twilight ahaha... Anyways, I know you can come up with a good story.. :) one that's creepy enough for us. hahaha
I think I'll go with angst the next time i write something. Because I've done naive romances, now horror. I think angst and fantasy would be a nice addition to my literary list
ooohhhh... angst and fantasy.... twisted... hahaha
Yes, that vampire thing gave me an idea
he (the vampire) must be very angry ahahhaa or maybe she's met a vampire and grew curious about them. hahha
I was thinking something different though. I'll try to type that in tomorrow so that i can officially go back to my research stuff 😂
The last like of the article, you could escape the house but cannot escape her. I felt that and I am scared now 🙃😳😂
😂😂😂😂 now you'll have to be careful where you pass by, you'll never know who could be watching
Lol. Let me be honest and tell you that I have heard similar stories where people have said that similar things actually happened to them. 😱 😱
I also have 😂 in almost every goosebump installment that came out. Still can't believe that was basically my childhood
Lol. I personally never felt something similar and that is why just the thought of it actually happening scares the shit out of me 😂
I kept getting that feeling at this one house we moved into when i was in the 5th grade. Later on, i learned that a family was murdered in that house, that's why it was so cheap and why i always felt like someone was watching me from the stairs. As much as the house was nice. I really hated my stay there
This is always a family being murdered in one of the houses and then ghosts hunt the house and the people who move in get screwed 😂😂
We didn't get screwedbut i got so scared of going home that we eventually moved out 😂 it was a family of 3 though. The parents then the kid that hung out by the stairs. One parent was always at the top of the staircase for some reason. I hated going up our room all the time ;-;
Lucky for you guys to be safe of any harm and who know may be it was just a story to scare the people aroundX
Even in reality we aren't alone in this world. There are other creatures living among us and all. Btw very well written article, i hope you win
Same same, it would be nice to win but i saw other entries that looked like better candidates for the spot
Nice article. Waiting for your next article.🤗♥
Thank you, I'm not sure what will be next though
Goosebumbs 👻👻👻
Thanks, i was hoping to give that feeling
Nice dear job well done best if luck to you
Thank you so much
Ure welcome
*Shivers*
I hope you enjoyed my entries 😊
Oh, I did alright!
I guess we'll be friendly rivals in free write contests from now on 😂
Let the games begin. As Might Guy would say, this is our 'hot-blooded rivalry'
I dunno about hot-blooded when it's rather supportive in a way 😂
Nah I'm just joking. That's what Guy always said even when Kakashi didn't care about the so-called rivalry.
And since i am not a naruto fan, i cannot relate enough 😅😅😅
Oh I see XD
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