Miracle on a train.

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Mr. Peters couldn’t hold his joy at the news he got from his wife, he quickly rushed home into the house from the garden to take his phone to call his mother who had put so much pressure on his wife for not conceiving a year after marriage.

He screamed in excitement, "mama, my wife is pregnant". The news went around the family members and they started calling him to congratulate him but Mr. Peters was angry because it was supposed to be secret but you can’t blame Mr. Peters since he got married late and he was anxious to have his child.

The Peters families were rich and ready to do anything to raise their child; Mrs. Peters was flown abroad immediately to start her antenatal care. She settled in fine and started going for her antenatal, the pregnancy was five months when the doctors noticed something strange. They contacted Mr. Peters and informed him that they will be doing a series of tests for his wife due to the signs they saw with pregnancy.

He was scared and restless that he had to book a flight immediately to the UK; he met his wife and assured her nothing was wrong. They fixed a date for the appointment and went as planned; Mr. Peters was restless all through the process and his fears increased when he was called for the results later that evening. He was heartbroken at the news that one of the twins his wife was carrying had Down syndrome, he went home sad after the meeting with the doctor.

He told his wife everything and she wept bitterly, Mr. Peters told his mom about it and she said there was an herb to correct it. He didn’t hesitate to jump on a plane the third day after he spoke with his mother, the wife was against it but Mr. Peter believed so much in his mother. They returned and did so much that cost them a lot of money but everything was a total waste of time, effort, and money.

They ran the test again in Nigeria but it was the same result, they gave up when the doctors warn them against taking contents that can harm the babies. Mrs. Peters wasn’t happy about it, she wept whenever she thought about her child having Down syndrome.

The eighth month reached and she fell into labor two weeks before the expected date, she was rushed to the hospital and had a successful delivery.

It was a boy and a girl; it was the female who had Down syndrome, people celebrated with them and they took the child’s condition off their minds, things returned to normal after the children naming ceremony. The kids started growing and Mr. Peter started paying more attention to the male child, he believed that the female child will spend the rest of her life with them because of her Down syndrome.

Mrs. Peters wasn’t happy about it and always reminded her husband of the promises he made about the children but the discussion always ended in a heated argument.

The kids got ripe for school, Elvis was taken to one of the biggest schools in the state while Evelyn was at home and this stole the peace away in the family, their mother would quarrel with Mr. Peter about it always.

After many troubles, he agreed to put her in one school in the neighborhood. Evelyn was a pretty girl, full of life and energy. She was smart and always eager to step outside the outside since it is not something she did often.


The day came and she was taken out to be enrolled in a school, her mom was very happy about it. They arrived at the school and after lots of discussions, she was rejected. Mrs. Peter was angry and she stormed out of the headmaster’s office, her eyes were filled with so many tears as she grabbed her daughter and approached the gate.

To be continued...


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Although I feel sad for Evelyn but I think at last part we can learn something by this story. Waiting for end part.

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2 years ago

Every girl out there is to be treated good and equal as the other gender out there no matter what his or her condition is.. It's just sad that there are people who's like that..especially when it come to those kind of cases..

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2 years ago

Everyone deserves a normal life, we all deserve to be given a chance.

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2 years ago

What?? They rejected her?? No, this isn't right.. the little girl just want to learn. I'm glad her mom is staying by her side and hope the father realizes his mistakes and have her loved.

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2 years ago

Yes they did, too bad. Her condition wasn't a death sentence, I hope they realize that they weren't fair for treating her that way.

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2 years ago

By reading the story I feel myself walking along with Peters . Can't leave the script untill end , Waiting for second part . Absolutely stunning script!!

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2 years ago

The second part of the story will be released later today.

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2 years ago

What an interesting story, I can't wait for the concluding part. The husband shouldn't have don't that, he should accept it as fate

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2 years ago

That's true, there are a lot of things we don't have control over, and when it happens, we should just accept it as our cross.

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2 years ago

Ohh 😯 this your creativity is always awesome buddy, many thoughts is going through my head with the titles and the story so I had to guess Evelyn will be smarter and maybe successful than Elvis. Mr Peter shouldn’t have do like that.

I’ll be willing to read the next part soon and also I hope the headmaster will put Evelyn in high Class than her mum wanted.

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2 years ago

I enjoyed reading your last part of the Elevator Doctor, Mr. Peters wasn't been fair to young Evelyn but we don't know how things would fold out yet.

The concluding part will be released today.

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Most parents don't even think about the future, they try to pamper the male child and care less for the female child coz they believe the boys are the head of the house. I have seen a parents ego vibes birth to 5 females and the girls see doing well with their father's properties, maintaining everyone's homework. .......... I wonder what will happen to Elvis and Mr. Peter. 🤔

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2 years ago

Female children are great and not to be written off, I think Mr. Peters is just partial because of the girl's down syndrome.

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2 years ago

Is this a true story? Im so sad for Evelyn and as a mother I feel the sadness of Mrs. Peter.. Mr. Peter should treat both child equally

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2 years ago

It's not real, it is a fiction story. I love writing stories a lot.

Mr. Peter was making a huge mistake by ignoring the girl, no matter what condition a child as - he or she remains a child.

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2 years ago

Ah ok.. wow! you're good in making stories..

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2 years ago

Thanks for the compliments.

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2 years ago

Oh I love the story already. I can't wait to finish it.

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The concluding part will be dropped later today

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My oh my! Mr Peter shouldn't have given up on his daughter, can't wait for the continuation... Such an interesting write-up, I hope this doesn't end in tragedy though.

Forgive my inquisitiveness, but could you spare me the definition of "down syndrome." I completely know nothing of what it entails.

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2 years ago

Down Syndrome is a condition that affects humans right from the pregnancy stage, it affects the physical look, the nervous system, response, and mental ability.

You can read about it online, Mr. Peter did a very huge mistake by ignoring his daughter because of her condition. What kind of father does that???

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Oh my!! It's that bad😱 thanks for the brief explanation.

Oh, thanks, I would. He really did and I guess it's because he wasn't the one who carried her for nine months in a womb.

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