“Locked up”

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Synopsis

She hated to see herself in the mirror, it's as if she's seeing a different person when she looks through it especially in the eyes. It's not that she's ugly, but it's about her aura. Sometimes she looks fine seeing herself in the mirror but most of the time she doesn't like it especially when she looks at it longer. Her reflection showing the other side of herself. ‘‘Who are you?’’ she asks while seeing her reflection smiling at her.

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Nicky has been bullied since she was young, her father left her mom when she was little. Her father abandoned them and choose to go with his mistress. Since then, she has been bullied because of their family situation. She is a shy type of girl, she does not mingle with her classmates. She is aloof, she became the favorite of her bully classmates because she is silent.

Her mom works to support their financial needs and to send her to school, her mom does not spend much time with her because she was busy working to provide for their needs. She pities her mom, sometimes in the middle of the night, she hears her mom crying. So she didn't tell her mom that she was being bullied at school so she will not add up to her burdens.

She is kind and soft, a very considerate girl. She always considered the feelings of her mom, that is why she keeps her bullying moments to her. Even in school, she is kind to her classmates that made them take advantage of her kindness. Despite her experiences, she managed to have good grades that even more annoying to her bully classmates. They hated her because she's too aloof that they cant copy to her answers during assignments or quizzes or ask any help. After all, they are dumb. Aside from that, she is also the teacher's favorite because she behaves well and she is polite.

One afternoon when the class is over she went to the comfort room before heading head home. Inside the ladies room, she saw her classmates, Anna, Jenny, Fatema, and Aina. Her bully classmates.

‘‘Oh look who's here guys ’’ Jenny mumbled.

‘‘It's our genius classmate ’’ said Anna smiling evil.

“Do you know guys that our school is hunted? especially this lady's comfort room. There are rumors that there was a student who committed suicide here?” She heard them talking when she passed by.

She went to the cubicle directly without minding them. While doing her thing, she heard the girls laughing evilly. She wondered why they were laughing like that. After flushing the toilet she went outside, she noticed that the door entrance was closed. When she tried to open the door it was locked. No wonder why her bully classmates laughing like evils when she was inside the cubicle, they locked her up. She keeps turning the doorknob and shouting for help. Since the class hours ended, nobody heard her. She was crossing her fingers while praying for somebody will come to open her but sadly nobody comes. The sun is already down, darkness was slowly replacing the light. She's afraid in the dark, she started feeling nervous while she sat near the door. She's afraid in the dark because she has seen a shadow in the dark before, she is certain it was a supernatural thing because how can you see a shadow in the dark?

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To be continued.


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Oi oi, another story,, waiting sa next chapter. May dadating kaya na tagapagligtas 🤔, di naman baka horror ito, haha malapit pa namn na ang Halloween 😂

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4 years ago

Nyahahahaha! parang iwan di ko pa alam pano sundan itong plot na ito 😆😂

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4 years ago

Yaka yan ikaw paba. Antay antay kami sa next chapter. So di mo pa alam if mga ilang chapter yan?

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4 years ago

Yup hindi haha pero pwd ko nmn patayin agad yung character para matapos na 😆

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4 years ago

Ay wag ganon, harsh ka masyado sa charavter mo, haha. Pwd na siguro mga 10 chapter hahaha

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4 years ago

ay grabe haba 😆😂

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4 years ago

Nice article, keep going

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4 years ago

thank you 😊

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4 years ago

Was this the part one of your series?

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4 years ago

Yes this is the part one.

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4 years ago

Ohh then I'll go look ip the rest of the chapters UwU

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

Oh sorry my bad I will delete it. I didn't see it while ago..

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4 years ago

did you able to withdraw it? give me feedback?

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4 years ago

So I have to wait for the next part, huhu. I always like it when it started so weak then getting confidence and fighting! I want to see her fighting the bullies!

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4 years ago

Thanks for the tip 😊 Yes I will publish it soon..

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4 years ago

great article just keep it up

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4 years ago

Nice Nice, did you do this with a prompt? I'd love to see where this story is heading!

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4 years ago

No, I didn't use prompt. Should prompt varies in every part?

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4 years ago

Not really. It's your choice.

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4 years ago

Oh okay, thanks maybe Ill use prompts on my next story. I drafted this one before knowing the prompts on Reddit.

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4 years ago

Oh, that's okay.

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4 years ago

San pede kumuha ng plot for hooror and suspense stories.. 🤔

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4 years ago

meron sa reddit sila hanzell dun kumukuha nakalimutan ko link hanapin ko. Di ko pa nga na visit yan naisip ko na kase yang plot na yan bago ako nag ask kung saan kukuha promts. Pero dyan ako kukuha maybe sa next parts.

Edit: https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts

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4 years ago

salamat po dito haha, buti nag halungkat ako dito sa comments. 😅🇵🇭 mag tatanong sana ako kung saan galing yung ➡️[WP] Writing Prompts eh haha

thanks again

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4 years ago

Hehehe yeah, it's from reddit 😊 Welcome..

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4 years ago

Maopen nga...

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4 years ago

Bitiiin. 🤦‍♀️🤣🤣

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4 years ago

haha ganyan talaga 😆

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4 years ago

🤣🤣🤣Following

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4 years ago

Naalala ko nung sinabi mo na COVID positive yung kapitbahay nyo. Akala ko about dun yung article 😅 Iba pala 🤦🏻‍♀️

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4 years ago

hahahahaha dahil sa locked up? pag word lock covid agad nasa isip natin noh 😆😂

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4 years ago

haha associated na ang word na locked sa Covid 😅 Anyways, I like the plot ❤️

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4 years ago

hahaha oo nga eh, dahil sa covid gamit na gamit ang word na yan. Thanks hehe

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4 years ago

Oh interesting..

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4 years ago

haha okay lang ba ang plot?/

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4 years ago

Oo, naalala ko yung Rose na movie ni Julia Baretto haha.. Yung nilock sya sa wardrobe

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4 years ago

Ay oo nga noh, parang ganon nga ito na alala ko tuloy 😆 pero ibahin ko na lang twist 😁

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4 years ago

Oka naman ya..hehe.. Iba nmn sory nun 😁

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4 years ago

Part 2 naman dyan 😄

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4 years ago

Thanks sa tip haha huna2 pa ko unsaon pag part 2 ana 😆😂

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4 years ago

Dali rana uy, ikaw pa :D

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4 years ago

hahaha unsaon. Dali ra lge unya kay kapuyan sad baya ta 😆 pero naa rana next part hehe.

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4 years ago

Pahuwayi sag usa kasemana 😂 hahaha

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4 years ago

grabi sad nang isa ka simana wa natay tips ana hahah

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4 years ago

Hahaha gani 😄 ayg kapoy2 ara 😂

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4 years ago

hahaha para sa tips noh 😆

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4 years ago

Syempre 😂

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4 years ago

like

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4 years ago

What do you like? 😅

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