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The Best I Could Give To You Mother

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Written by   255
2 months ago
Topics: Fiction, Story, Writings

What gift did you want to get from your mother? Or what present you wanted to offer her? Is the gift you just wanted to present and offer to have a significant meaning? Just be mindful of the consequences.

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The little Vince is watching his favorite Harry Potter series when he hears his mother talking on the phone. He smiled at his Mom when she walks in from of him, but seemingly Amalia doesn’t see her son's greeting features and just continue going into the kitchen.

Vince knew tomorrow is a special day for his Mom. Same as last year they will expect lots of visitors merely Amalia friends and co-workers from a BPO company hanging around in their house. The person whom Amalia spokes is her friend Natalie; they are planning for a great celebration for her birthday.

He wanted to surprise his Mother this year, he knows she has been in a very hard situation in eight years after Vince was born. The moment he was released from his mother’s womb, his Dad fled and never comes back home. Amalia was very sad and angry about what happened to his partner, they never married and now she doesn’t know where Vince’s father goes.

“Mom, what you wanted for your birthday?”. Sweet Vince tried to interrupt the mother chit-chatting with her friend, but Amalia Ignored her child and focuses on the planning of what to fix for tomorrow. Vince just smiled and leaves the kitchen, went to his room, and prepared his pens and colors for him to write a birthday letter for his Mom.

Short Story 01; The Best I Could Give To You Mother

The day had come; Vince groomed his self to greet his mother. He quickly prepared the shirt and happily entered the shower for him to take a bath. He sings the favorite lullaby his mother always sang when he was young. He appears refreshed and good.

Going downstairs, their already a guest in the kitchen, it’s her friend's Mom they are serving the food for the night's party with their friends and co-workers. Young Vince just prepared his meal; he grabs the oats and took milk from the fridge, like a normal thing he does the morning.

He places the bowl in the top of the facing the two busy woman preparing in the kitchen. His mother sees him but just gives him a glance and never attempted to take any words for the child. He quickly finished the breakfast and prepared his gift for his mother.

Times fly and the ticking time is moved faster than he could imagine, the music starts to play, visitors are coming and greeted her with their individual presents. What a lovely evening of her birthday. The room is filled with people whom she knows, even the boss is present that makes the party even more interesting. Chit-chatting or singing.

One of her friends enters with a cake and candles of 28. He began to sing then later the people around her started to be part of the group. She can’t imagine how happy she is at the moment. She closes her eyes and wishes on before blowing the candles, “My Birthday wish is that I will be happy again every day!”. People clap at her for sharing her wish with everyone.

Peter her best friend; let her sits in the chairs. He took the boxes of greeting cards and he tells that he will pick any cards and he will read this to her. The crowd saw this as interesting activity, so they are all warmly excited to hear the wishes of everyone.

“First” Peter even drums the boxes full of cards. He puts his hand inside the box, the crowd was amazed when they see the front page of the letter was made by an artistic child. The color of glitters and drawing was seemed made by the very talented child. “Who’s Vince?” Peter looked at her curiously Amalia laugh and says he’s nothing. The crowd becomes curious and started to investigate. Peter curiously opens the letter, “Let us see what is here!”. The crowd claps and wanted to start the activity

Dear Mom,

Happey berthday tu yu, I love yu and I will always lab you forever. 

I know wat makes yu happey, I want yu to get back the time that I wasn’t here. I know It was my fault dat yu not happey anymore. I should be gone.

The crowd becomes silent and shocked at what they heard. Peter laughed because he knows Amalia has no child, but a single lady at her young twenty. She began to felt something weird and Amalia quickly rushes to her son's room.

She opened it, the light was off. She presses the switch and she was shocked to see his son peacefully sleeping, he’s sleeping like an Angel. She walks toward the young boy and sees the face of her partner. It’s like a duplication of the first love she had, the love that hurts her.

She gives him the blanket for him not to be cold and kissed his forehead. Now she realized something is wrong. She put her hand on his child’s head and it feels cold, she immediately rushed to hear the heartbeat of the angel. The tears in her eyes began to flows; her heart is pumping too loudly that she can hear it resoundingly.

She grabs the son’s body, trying to wake him up but never happened. Instead, he hears something like blows in her ears “mother this is the best I could give to you”

-end-

Dears readers;

This is a fiction story, made by yours truly. Any name of characters and plot that is closely related to any individual is just a coincidence and the story is never been real. Thank you.

Tell me what you think about my short story.


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What—this is so sad! Why do parents neee to hide it anyway? First of all it's not the child's plan to be born into the world. Why should Vince thunk of these problems when he should be playing? He always have that smile and energy so I did not notice he's doing something this bad. :(

By the way, your writing style is kinda different in this one. And I still like it.

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2 months ago

Thanks for reading. But really this vince is face or many child. When we think it's they fine but NO.

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2 months ago

I have this feeling sa title palang na tragedy eh. Sana pala huhuhu. Bakit kasi dinadamay pa yung bata sa galit eh 😭😭

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2 months ago

Oww halla sorry kung ikaw din nadala.. But that's really the story goes, so some readers may think carefully. The fiction tells what will happened if we do the mothers action in real life.

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2 months ago

Ang sakit naman nito parz 🤧 Yung bata na lang nag sakripisyo para maging masaya ang mama. Grabe naman to.

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2 months ago

Hehe sorry sa drama ng story 😅

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2 months ago

Parang ikaw madrama haha. Grabe talaga. Ang bigat sa dibdib nito.

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2 months ago

Grabe 😭 Bat naman ganon yung ending? Isa kana din sa mga nampapatay ng characters HAHAHA

Kailangan talaga nating i appreciate yung mga taong andyan habang di pa huli ang lahat 😭 nakakainis yung Mama niya hays

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2 months ago

Oww I'm sorry for the drama of the story. Hehe but I know there is a valid lesson to the words

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2 months ago

Oo naman tama ka jan. Lahat may rason kung bakit dina kayo ng ex mo😭 Ay este yun lang

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2 months ago

How sad... ayoko ng ending na ganito, shookt.. it may be a fiction but somehow it happens in real life.. single parents especially mothers should shower their child with love ksi un ung tinira ng taong minsan ay minahal nila tsaka sila nagluwal sa bata

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2 months ago

Hehe aorry sa ending. But yeah it happens in real life, unlike my fiction the scenario is worse than this 😪

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2 months ago

Bakit naman ganyan sir Eunoia??🥺

Okay na ako sa pag.love story mo nung una eh' kilig² na ako konti eh, tas ba't yung sumunod, biglang ganito..??

hahaha... ameejjjj...😂

Pwede ka na talaga maging writer po..☺️👏

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2 months ago

Hahaha from the outside the box Teacher Ren 🤣. I really enjoying stories now.. Ewan ko ba

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2 months ago

Sana all may pa.talent na ganyan..😌 hahaha..

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2 months ago

Gma7 is waving. If you need a new telenovela writer 😉

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2 months ago

Haha mabalin ateng hahaha.. Soup opera man 🤣

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2 months ago

Another Fiction story .. Sobrang mapanakit talaga story mo Mareng Cindy😣 hindi pa naman patay diba anak niya ? Kasi tumitibok pa ei . .

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2 months ago

Need ba ng second part? 😁

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2 months ago

Oo naman haha

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2 months ago

Uy wag ganyan pare...kahit walang ama ang anak ko di ko pinakita sa kanya na naging at fault xia kung bakit single mom ako ngayon ...huhuhuhu napaiyak ako bakit ganun... kahit di totoo nasasaktan ako para sa bata na iniisip na isa siyang malaking pagkakamali..huhhhu amp!

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2 months ago

There is hidden meaning of the story and I know teenager who's users here can't analyzed. And I know you seen it mars, it's actually happening in real life kahit sabihin nating fiction.

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2 months ago

I know Pare ...sorry na immersed lang ako masyado sa story..alam mo naman ina rin ako ...and I know you post this to serve as a lesson sa mga kabataan natin ngyon...nadala lang talaga ako pare!

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2 months ago

Hahaha. Interesting fictional story. 😝

I thought it was a true story when I saw the title. Hehehe. But what could have happened to him seem her don has kicked the bucket. What a sad one. Just on her birthday 😾

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2 months ago

Indeed, that's the gift. Child may think its the best blessing he could give to his mother. Thanks man for reading.

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2 months ago

Shems, nakakaiyak. Even though it's purely fictional naiinis parin ako sa mother for being insensitive to her child's feeling. Nasa huli talaga ang pagsisisi.

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2 months ago

Kaya nga. Di padin mawawala na may nangyayaring ganyan in real life. But much worse to others

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2 months ago

Kaya hindi applicable palagi yung kasabihan na "walang magulang ang kayang tiisin ang anak" kasi sa nangyayari ngayon, may mga ibang magulang na sila pa ang nagbubugaw sa anak nila sa masama.

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2 months ago

this is out of my experience brother!

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2 months ago

Haha Just a product of imaginary man. I also don't know why I wrote the story 🤣

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2 months ago

you believe something? no leave it

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2 months ago

Wengyah!! Mapanakit ka rin ehh. 🤧 Though I know already the ending pero masakit pa rin talaga.

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2 months ago

Indeed. Your a mother, alam mo yan and also alam mo ding happened yan as real life

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