Moon Rise (That time I tried to make song lyrics)

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A glimpse to my younger version of a random thoughts writer.

Would you want to take a read and give some words about my past works?

Here we go!

05•17•2016

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Watching you there

Yes, you're there. With her

It adds to the tears in my heart

Heart left unspoken;

Heart made immune

By the pain.

You should be out of my sight;

Maybe the pain would end.

But crazy is my heart

For it is empty,

When there's no glimpse of you

Everyday.

She should be out of the scene

I should be the one there.

Sharing the Valentine cake with you

If this was a movie,

I can change the plot.

Don't smile at me—

You turn my world around

Make me fall for you even deeper,

Falling foolishly

Falling with no one

Catching me.

Because you're busy

Making her happy;

Asking me how to make her smile

If you could just know,

You're throwing daggers into my heart.

Alas! How could it be

That you make me happy—

Then you are the reason

Why my hearts suffers?

Why can't friends be lovers?

A question so complicated.

I can't answer that—

Until you're mine.

We can be together

If ever she'd be out of the scene

Of if the moon would rise

In the morning

Only then you could be mine.

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Another random prose I made three to four years ago. :-))

I can clearly see how random my ideas are back then. I am just laughing at my 16 year old self a bit. LOL

And just a disclaimer, I haven't experienced falling in love with a best friend, I don't even have one.

Even this might seem so cringy, I pushed myself to post this as a means of expressing my younger writer version.

I hope you like it!


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I liked it. Why don't you write an ebook for Amazon. You could be successful. Amazon kindle books are popular or even paperback. It is a good platform fir self publishing. I might try to come up with a melody too. :)

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3 years ago

Really? I didn't expect such a feedback. I appreciate all of you to make a song out of it. I am excited to how it will turn out.

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3 years ago

I have a portable keyboard. I can try to add chords on it and come up with a melody, but I cannot sing. Lol

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3 years ago

I would love to listen to the melody, even just an instrumental. Haha! I feel kinda thrilled that it could really make sense as song lyrics. :-D

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3 years ago

It could be a song lyrics.

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3 years ago

you are such a very talented girl keep inspiring I am one of your fan.

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3 years ago

Oh my goodness. Thank you for your amazing words! I will work harder and make you more proud. :))

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3 years ago

Did you compose music for this too?

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I tried making a melody, but I failed. I guess I am not meant to be in composing music, hehe. Just a few words without even rhymes, I think it made sense, but still random.

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3 years ago

It sounds quite nice singing it. I tried. If I have the time, may I sing it for you? I am not promising but I will give it a try.

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3 years ago

Oh yes, of course! Are you going to post in on Youtube? I would love to listen to it!

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3 years ago

With your permission. I will give it a try.

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I would love to! Go, I want to see it! Thank you for taking interest in my works.

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