@Dolores
Chance
The sky was getting dark, yet here I am walking alone on the road. I can't still believe what had happened a while ago. I can't conceal anymore this feeling that any second may burst out. As the rain fell to the ground, my tears flowed down through my cheeks. I promised before that I will not cry from the same man ever again, but here I am crying as my knees are shaking. It seems that destiny is really playing tricks on me. I cried out loud as if there's no tomorrow. I gave him a chance, but he didn't treasure it. He doesn't prove his worth to me. He is just really playing my feelings. I should not be like this if only I have opened my eyes from reality from the start. I continue crying as I walk alone on the cold road. I don't care anymore where will my feet bring me. I must still be thankful because at least, the rain is covering the truth that I am crying. I am about to cross the road when a bright gleaming light strikes my eyes. I can hear a loud buzzing sound from everywhere, but I already stop. I just waited to what will happen next. #Sad_Vibes This is a short fiction story. It's a cliffhanger!
19 comments
Very nice fiction story dear. Keep sharing such posts. Really enjoying the story, sad and well written. Keep it up dear.
Thanks for the words of encouragement and appreciation. ❤️
Always welcome😍
although it is difficult to accept the word chance is forgiveness which means chance to those who have sinned against us.
Don't allow past negative events like this pull you down ok, instead use them as motivation and learn from them
The story is not true, just a fiction. But, you are right with your comment.
I know,thanks
a very sad scene from a very sad story
U turn ur imagination in reality😁
Thanks☺️
That was a really tragic write up, oh wow. This is going to be noted down indeed :")
Thanks for appreciating it. ❤️
Your expertise will be greatly needed in the literary world
Nice fiction story. It's indeed a cliffhanger. I am hoping for part II
Thank you for your words of appreciation guys❤️
It hurts when you give someone a chance and he doesn't value it
Yeah, it really hurts.
so this was the one am gonna write a comment but nwt is too slow that comment box won't appear. it was so tragic, yet realistic.khit work of fiction lng xa but to anyone who has given worth, most specially a chance but prang d sapat,mawawalan k tlga ng focus at ang gusto mo lng gwin is mkalayo. but thn the second part explains it all
True👏❤️