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Fight
***M****y life is full of gamble,* ***A****long the journey I stumbled.* ***R****eaching the name of the game,* ***K****aleidoscope of either fame or shame.* ***Zero*** *to ten, I'll count again.* ***One*** *more try,* ***Two*** *more while i cry.* ***Two*** *more until I fly.* ***Zero*** *to ten, I'll count again* ***Seven*** *fails, I'll stand up eight* *Walk towards the place where the trophy awaits.* As requested by @Mark012207. I hope you like it😳 I'll accept constructive criticism🤗 I made a little experiment of using your user name as a guide😁 Thank you for reading!
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Wow. I like it. You create a poem using my name. That's amazing. You came up with such a quick poem. Perfect 💞💞! Thank you very much, dear 💞💞 !
I'm glad you like it❤ thank you🤗
Always challenge yourself because you have a future💞💞
Awesome 👍😊. Iike wow 😍
Thank you I appreciate your comment❤
You have the talent
Oh thank you for recognizing my work❤
You are a talented girl. I like your poem very much...I think if you practice more you can write more quality poem. Best wishes for you
Thank you, i will do my best to grow more in writing🤗
Wow it's nice!! The theme is beautiful. In the way towards success failure may come but we can not stop there we have to try again and again untill success comes
Thanks🤗 never stop trying until we reach our goals
Keep sharing
Your skill is a promise. Great work!
Thank you🤗
Hahaha, love the creativity. I thought it was MARKZOTTZS for a sec.
Hahaha it's weird to add as in numbers so i used words, thanks btw🤗
You have a amazing talent in constructing poem. I hope their is a kaleidoscope that will reflect the fame and shame as one in a infinite views. 😆
Thank you😊 We'll make one haha
I think @heartbeat1515 might like this one. So far I believe you are the first who used this type of poetry. Well done a big 👍 for you. P.s. I wonder why you added the block with sponsors twice. It is very dominant and takes all the attention away from what is written.
Thank you for the compliment🤗 I tried using the $ sign that's why it happened to be like that, but I'll remove it thank you for saying something about it🤗
Nice poem
Thanks🤗
Here I am. I was about to ask regarding your relationship with Mark before I read the last part. I haven't been writing this kind of poem for a very long time. I think I wrote one for my daughter but forgotten where I put it. I think whoever who have fallen and stumble but manage to get up over and over again will directly understand the message inside this poem.
I don't have specific relationship with him/her, he commented in one of my poems and asked if i could write a poem about failure, so did I. Receiving a request is quite an achievement for me so as a little token i used his username as a guide and dedicated it to him since he requested it. Indeed, and i guess almost all people experienced failure and this is a reminder that they have to stand up even how many time they stumbled.
I am glad to be tag under your article. I enjoy reading your poem.
Oh thank you it means a lot to me🤗
I understand that feeling.