If it doesn't fit, I'll adjust my feet — @Charlotte on read.cash

@Charlotte 30 July 2020 more from that month

If it doesn't fit, I'll adjust my feet Hi everyone😊 It took a bit long for me to publish a Found Poem, this is of course new to me and I tried a lot of poems of my favorite author. I'll publish my version of @CrazyInsane 's *"The Shoe that doesn't fit"* I suggest you read his poem before reading my version🤗 https://read.cash/@CrazyInsane/the-shoe-that-doesnt-fit-2a652484#comment-3b0ac918 If it doesn't fit, I'll adjust my feet

Thank you for reading and I hope I didn't ruin @CrazyInsane 's poem🥺😳 ________________________ Often times we found ourselves alone and that nobody understands us. It feels like we are lost and no can feel the pain as much as we do, but don't ever forget that there's still someone, even just one, one person who's willing to adjust, to fit in our own shoes, for us to feel loved and needed.🤗😁

12 comments

@glossyberrycraze 30 July 2020

labyu
- @Charlotte 30 July 2020
  
  I labyuu too❤😘
@kimberlycullen 30 July 2020

Really nice poem...... I like it...... For me the person who fits in my shoes better is my twin...... We can't be separated......
- @Charlotte 30 July 2020
  
  Thanks for appreciating❤ it's nice to know that you have someone you can lean on
@Winona 30 July 2020

Great job!😊 I hope u enjoy found poetry.
- @Charlotte 30 July 2020
  
  I really did enjoy it❤
@Yayaya13 30 July 2020

Wow❤
@z_graeden 30 July 2020

am a fan of poems during highschool days..would sit and read those parang nonsense lines na d naiintindihan ng iba,but me I found peace rEading them lalo na mga haiku,nkalimutan q na sila..and yeah be grateful if there is one,even just one who would try to fit in a shoe.
- @Charlotte 30 July 2020
  
  Thank you for reading and for your appreciation❤ indeed, even just one who understands is enough🤗
@heartbeat1515 31 July 2020

You did change the feeling inside the poem. For his poem, it feels sad and lonely but you brighten it by making it into a poem with a little bit of hope and joy.
- @Charlotte 31 July 2020
  
  Thank you very much for reading and giving your insights, i love reading your comments because i can get something from it, either it's a compliment or a room for me to grow, thank you,😊
  - @heartbeat1515 31 July 2020
    
    You are welcome. I only comment about my own thoughts after reading. I am glad to be of some assistance.