Magical moth
I peered into our outside bathtub. It was located next to our house, held up by a wooden platform me and my parents had made especially for holding it up. There was a moth floating in the old murky water, it's wings splayed out beside it, unmoving. I knew it was already dead. Still, I couldn't help but put my finger under it's fragile little body, and gently lift it out of the water. As I started at it, I started gently blowing air onto it. I didn't know why, it was useless. I mean.... It already died.still, I kept blowing air onto it. I walked back and forth on our deck as I did so. Then I saw my dad on the deck watering the plants and flowers. I walked over to him and showed him the moth.
**Image Source** https://pin.it/2eOfXZv "Hey dad," I said. "Look what I found in the bathtub. A dead moth! I'm gonna try to save it." Why did I say that? It was already dead. D-E-A-D. My dad looked at it. "Oh wow, you can do it!" He said that with a smile on his face, and the hose in his hand. I wasn't so sure, but I kept blowing air on it. Secretly, I was pretending that I was reviving it, but I wasn't so sure, and I didn't want to get my hopes up. "We'll see." I said, resuming my gentle blowing. I opened the deck door to the house my parents made themselves when I was a baby, and stepped inside, still blowing. "Hey mom, I found a moth in the bathtub." I said. She was inside, busy doing something, but she paused for a little to look at the moth on the tip of my finger. "I'm sorry sweetheart, if it's not dying, it's dead." She said. I'm knew it. I knew it already, but I didn't stop blowing. I blew for a long time after that, non-stop. There was still a small small chance that- Suddenly, I saw a small movement, and what I thought was a sparkle. Barley noticeable, but there. I held my breath mentally, and kept blowing, never taking my eyes off of it. I imagined it, right? It couldn't have moved! but when it fluttered again, I couldn't help but grin. "Mom, Dad! It's alive.." i whispered as calmly as I could. I didn't know if they could hear loud noises, so I avoided shouting. My mom couldn't believe it, she was amazed. I "practically revieve it," as she put it. My dad didn't seem surprised, he knew I could do it. I kept blowing on it's swings, slightly harder now, to dry it, and prepare it for flying off. When it was flapping it's wings pretty well to dry them off, I gently cupped my hands around it, and stepped outside onto our deck to set it free. But when I opened my hands, it was gone... Without a trace.
***Author's Note*** : Hey guys, thanks for reading, I appreciate it. I just thought I would let you know that this short story is actually a dream I had about half a year ago. It was.... Truly Magical✨. I did my best to write it as similar to what actually happened, while making it as story like as possible at the same time as I could. I hoped you enjoyed! 😊
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22 comments
This story is really good po. I enjoy reading it din po. 😊 Buti po ay natatandaan nyo pa po yung dream nyo after a year.
Haha oo natandaan ko pa pero hindi siya as in lahat . Ganyan naman tao basta maganda panaginip maalala natin minsan yung iba pag gising limot na
Hahahha opo ako kapag hindi pp masyadong maganda din po yung dreams ko mabilis ko lang po malimutan.
Wow! You are so persistent in reviving the moth. I never thought it's possible either.
Persistent ako sa panaginip sis. Sana talaga maging totoo. Dami kong nababasa na nangyayari yan in real Life. :-)
Ngayon lang ako narinig ng persistent sa panaginip sis hehe
Awee, I find it so cute reading this short story of yours :>
Thank You sis :) kahit fiction lang nagagawa ko dahil sa imagination ko
OmgNG CUTEEEEBparang moth from heaven syaaa. Ang gandaaa, siguro sinubok lang si baby para malaman if mabuti syaaaa.
From heaven nga siguro Mare kasi panaginip ko lang ei. Haha oo Pagsubok lang niya yon :)
Maamsh. I really adore you in making stories hays. This piece is well-written. Good kob sis.
Ayieee salamat sa pag appreciate ng story ko Sis. Haha buti naalala ko pa to kung hindi wala ako ma papublish
Ahahaha, and so I thought it was real :D Nice story!
Ayiee thank you Sis :) nangyayari yan sa real life haha yun mga nababasa ko sa iba ei
I thought it was a true story until i read the Author's note😂. Nice one caroline.
Thank you for your time to read my Magical Stories 😊
Kala ko talaga totoo ganda ng pagkakagawa mo, Kung totoo man yun, siguro Miracle yun.
May mga nababasa din kasi ako na ganyan haha nangyayari siya sa totoong buhay
I wish the moth was alive for real. 😁 And if I happen to see a dead moth, I will try to revive it to see if I can lol
Real na real? Haha Thank you nag enjoy ka sa pag babasa kahit galing yan sa panaginip ko.
Ang cute namn po ng dreams ninyo!!🤩parang nagbabasa lang ako ng story book ☺️. Parang fairytale ung datingan..☺️
Kaya nga po haha Nice too meet youSis 😊 sana nga mangyari siya in real life.