True Creepy Stories: GO AWAY! Part II

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Hello there! The long wait is over, this is the part two of my friends true creepy stories. Yesterday, I immediately asked him to write the continuation, for the reason that it was so "bitin" and a lot of you got curious of what will happen next so here it is.

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Continuation...

After he successfully passed the two trees that yielded him a way in, a miraculous moment that he's been waiting for has come.

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Unexpectedly, amidst of the darkness and deafening silence, a troupe of shrimps lively jumping over the shallow water! the shrimps were like having a festival! There are too many of them and for sure his net will be filled with shrimps. He was so happy on that moment putting him on a state of losing all of the fear that he felt back there. He then exclaimed, oh! How fortunate! how come this stupid shrimps appeared just now.

After catching the shrimps he immediately look out for a land to put the shrimps he had caught straight into his bucket. The festival of shrimps is still on going! jumping here, jumping there, jumping everywhere! When my grandfather activated his kerosene lamp, suddenly, all of the place turned out into a quite place again, feels like you're alone in your classroom at 11:30pm without anyone around. Try to imagine it.

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The festival of shrimps is gone, all of the jumping shrimps disappeared and the swamp turns back without living creatures. When he looked at his net, he was so shocked and got goosebumps all over his body that moment, because all of the things that he saw was just only an illusion. There are only 3 shrimps that entered his net, and it seems so impossible. He never tried to be manipulated such, ever since in his life. He never yelled but his hands and feet are uncontrollably shaking in fear. Seems like there are ghosts toying with him.

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Along all the disturbing moment that he had faced, he did not lose hope, he might be scared but he still have the courage to move through the last part of the swamp. He picked up his net and said, this is the last part of the swamp and it is a bit deeper, but it won't stop me at all. Unhesitatingly, he used his net like a shovel, getting all the dirt and mud into his net premises and dashed forward until to the very end of the swamp.

Luckily, he wasn't wounded and finally he found what he's been looking for. A colony of shrimp gets into his net, enough to fill up his bucket. He said in a soft voice, now I know why you keep on scaring and luring me from the start, it is because this is where these shrimp lives.

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When he's finally done, he immediately gets out of the water and walked out into the land. It is still dark, and he is about to pass through the creepy old cemetery again. As he moves forward, there is something ahead of him, his trials hasn't ended at the waters. A two red fiery eyes appeared gazing straight unto him, enhanced by the reflection of his fire lamp. It has horns and it really looks like a devil, he was so frightened and in a few seconds of staring at the devil, he found out that it was just a only a carabao. He, mumbled, who the heck leashed this carabao in the middle of the cemetery, oh crap. However, his fearful heart cools down immediately and quickly leave the creepy place.

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I'm so glad to let you know that my grandfather was so happy telling him that I published his creepy life experience as an article. Awww, we made him smile, cheers!

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By the way, I want to extend my sincere gratitude to all who inspires my friend to write the second part of True Creepy Stories (TCS): Go away. He is hoping for your insatiable support to his upcoming TCS episodes.

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Comments

Hahhaha nakulbaan kos karabaw oi. Hahha seryusua na nako ba hahhahhaha.

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3 years ago

Nakulbaan kos kabaw .. Hahaha nice ang story. More pa please.

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3 years ago

Ahahaha pandamay kaayong gamay nu? Hehe post ko lng dito if may naisulat na sya😊

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3 years ago

Grabidad, ang daming obstacle bago syang nakaano. Goodness, buti nalang at di sya nagpadala sa takot aguyy talaga.

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3 years ago

Hahaha opo ate ruff yung last obstacle lng talaga di ako makamove on carabao lng pala haha

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3 years ago

Hahahahaha pero cute sa alst part we ahahahaha

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3 years ago

wala ko nahadlok sa pagbasa sa horror nahadlok sa picture naka attached🤦‍♀

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3 years ago

Haha talawan man diay ka kabisdak, hahaha. Gabii basaha unya adtu sa menteryo haha

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3 years ago

Kaya rana nimu hahaha

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3 years ago

Hahaha abi gane nkug tinood tung naa sungay carabao ra diay haha

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3 years ago

Gabi.e man jud maong in.ana hahaha

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3 years ago

Enjoyed the horrific story. That image with red eyes. Just reminded me my days.

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3 years ago

Adlaw man ka nagbasa

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3 years ago

Me too, i tend to imagine the scenes and it got me chills all over my body.

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3 years ago

Langga kakatakot naman yung shrimps.😲 Naka experience na din ako ng mga kababalaghan. Sobrang nakakaba talaga Langga. Grabe one time di talaga ako nakatulog.🥺

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3 years ago

Oo ate ganda, illusion lang pala lahat yung mga nahuli nya akala nya andami na niyang nahuli yun pala pinaglalaruan lamang siya. Share ka dn ng experience s mo ate ha .

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