Hey guys please check out my new story. Hope you will enjoy it. Please give me your opinion about the story. So that I could improve my writing skills.... 😇 https://read.cash/@LeoBanna/a-true-triangular-love-story-cb963bf1
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Don't forget to give your opinions in the comment section . And spread the link , if you like the story.... 🥰 Thank you.
I will surely check this out 💚
So sad,,,,It's a sad story!!!
Yap....☹️
Yes dear I check this..
Thank a lot 😊
It felt a bit too naive for me, sorry ;-;
It's okay. No problem.... 🥰
I'm sure there could be improvements in the emotions, i guess?
Thanks for your opinion dear. I also agree. I also felt that. But it was a real story. I didn't change anything , and it was my first English story. Hope that's why I couldn't describe as much as the real emotions was there... But I'll try to make more improvement in the emotions... 😇
Ohh a real story. That suddenly made it interesting to me 😂 but in your future stories though, hopefully it would give off more emotions
Okay. I'll try my best. Thanks for your opinion.😇
Okay I will check it out
Oh, love story😍 I'm so interested to read this article. Thanks for your short post. I will read it now.🌹