I Love You, Goodbye
"I will be missing you," the girl hugged her lover tightly, won't let go but they have to leave now. "Take care as always."The boy hugged her back and planted a kiss on her forehead. "I'm right here waiting for you,don't worry about me," he added. Five years passed already since that day the girl bid the boy farewell.She likes to pursue her dream in becoming a doctor someday,and was not held back by her sweet and supportive boyfie.. He was just a farmer,he loves the soil,the first born among 6 siblings. She is a star,an only child, while he is on the ground. Their family status is so much apart, nevertheless their relationship was not hindered by their parents. They were inseparable, childhood friends to lovers when they were in highschool..A bench on top of the hill,at the middle of the boy's vegetable garden was their favorite hang-out spot..It was where this young man reminisced their memories whenever nostalgia strikes,a place where he recalls their promises-his driving force. Five years had gone by, with this young man's determination and perseverance was he able to construct their would-be house.He was supporting his younger siblings who are now on college Another year to wait,another year and their dreams would be and promises would be fulfilled. One year is nothing compared to those five long years. One year had gone by, crops had been on the goodside of market for the last six years. He was able to make good investments including a car and truck for his crop deliveries and a pretty savings on the bank. Up until that time he loves the soil. It was his second from his girlfriend he had not seen for six long years. Their lawn was freshly mowed, the house was as usual vibrant always revealing a welcoming sight. But today's different, everyone's busy preparing the arrival of their young mademoiselle.. Unaware, the young man on his mid 20's was busy on his vegetable plot preparing for the plantation of the next crop. Resting on the bench at the top of the hill he can see the village not far.. His sight came to a spot... A luxurius car was parking on the parking lot of a grand house.He anxiusly waited for the car to open. A nicely,good looking guy came out of the driver's side. He went to the door behind and opened it. The young man at the hilltop anxius anticipated.. Minutes passed and the guy at the car closed the door behind,in his arms was a bouncy baby.The door beside the drivers side opened revealing a beautiful young lady. She came out the door and scanned the area around. Her eyes sent her sight unintentionally at that top of the hill.. Their eyes met. One moment it was joy, the world seems to stop. The guy with the baby has reached her side, laid his hand on her shoulder then she was awaken from that moment of slumber. She wrapped her hands on his waist and turned around and walked to the house. That moment he begun to falter.. How long had he been in that state, he could not remember.. "The skies are beautiful.But it's cold and late." A voice,yes that voice he had longed to hear for ages came from behind. It caught him off-guard and suddenly turned around.. She talked and talked yet the only word he heard and understood was, "I was already engaged and ready to be wed.We have a child,"her words.. "I wish you your family's happiness.Don't worry about me, I can manage." With all his courage,he stood up. Gave her final hug but this time it was him who said farewell. "Go to them, "he said."I love you so but now I'll continue on my own. Goodbye," his final words. #Sad_Vibes This is an entry to the Vibes community which is a community that brings out the best in you by coping with the weekly vibes provided. The Newbies Reward community aims to reward users under two months in this platform through their engagement or interaction and activities in the said community.It is also a step to getting sponsored if the facilitator @Macronald see that you are deserving of such sponsorship. Check out this link and join us https://read.cash/c/the-newbies-reward-3ff7 ***hit like,comment out your thoughts and subscribe..***
23 comments
Good one po :)
Ganda naman sis
So touching. It is seldom that long years of waiting end into a happy ending. Usually one will forget and break promises.
you're right.. This is just a product of my imagination but sadly it is happening. I wanna make it longer but short cut n lng, mabobore ang readers pag mahaba😁
Its quite a sad story... 😢
😁made a story about a kankanAey song I heard just recently when manay played the song in her fudra's cp
We can relate much from these songs. I like the story version of yours. Whats the title of the song?
jaja, I dont know... she played it randomly and it catched my attention..
Then she maybe heard it somewhere😁
Another tragic entry to keep an eye on... this hurt while reading it. I can only imagine the depression the farmer boy must have felt
after long years of waiting, have invested much for their future.. ughh so devastating..
Super ;-; if it were me, who had waited that long, i honestly would have left the town after
exactly coz being a man treated in a way is such a great pain on his ego.. btw, thanks for appreciating this entry of mine
I agree, sometimes it'll make them think that they were never enough I should say thank you for submitting such a good entry ;-;
I was left with no words to say. I always love happy endings. This one breaks my heart💔
gotta make something that's eye catching and one that would cope with this weeks vibe on vibes community
Nice
Interesting story
In this story, the saddest thing is that the young farmer waited for her for so long, he really loved her, but he was brave to tell her that he would get ahead without her.
the saddest indeed, he had not wasted time to make his life and his family prosper. invested lots and prepared for his future and his future wife..
I love u goodbye po's a movie which stars Alden Richards n Kathryn Bernardo po :)
ow.. I did not know about it.. d aq updated 😂
Gnun po ba, mganda po un, mdyo bitin nga lng po n just watched it po as i like Alden Richards po because my cousin po looks like him, lol n i just watch our movie here po if u just like it but if it's a horror one, i'll watch it po as i'm into horror movie po khit ano pa po yan, bsta nkakatakot po, lol