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Peace of mind - 4
He wanted her job and it would be easy enough to arrange that now she was taken out of the way. It was an easy job, he deserved it. It was one where people were still paid for being present and most of the activities in their lives we're brought by joining demonstrations, shouting their protests while in the meanwhile they yelled at policemen and other caretakers. He had watched her on television and followed her during the past year. She wasn't unfamiliar to him although most seemed to have forgotten about the slurry. He had identified her immediately as he visited the school's reunion. The woman doting on her children across the room was still recognizable as the bully from her high school. Mrs. Hypocrisy, the queen of the prompt and the most revolting person on earth. How could people be so blind not to see right through her! Those poor, poor children. By the time he was done, she was in hysterics but why should he care? She never cared about his feelings or how the others felt. Not one single minute she had left them alone. She enjoyed what she did. Peace was the only thing he had longed for all those years and that was what he gave her children. Peace at last. As the prison gate closed behind him, he saw someone waiting for him... Part 5 https://read.cash/@wakeupkitty/peace-of-mind-5-a015f736
Part 1 https://read.cash/@wakeupkitty/peace-of-mind-1-4bb0da76 Part 2 https://read.cash/@wakeupkitty/peace-of-mind-2-a7ddf447 Part 3 https://read.cash/@wakeupkitty/peace-of-mind-3-01d7f8d3 I can not tell anything about this story. I had no idea what to write about and for the first 4 parts, I used about 20 prompts generated and a plot which I not used. **Grammarly** ran **Device**: mobile phone **Prompts** for this story https://writingexercises.co.uk/firstlinegenerator.php
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Looks like you're down on the field. I respect and salute your work. Four parts in just 20 minutes.It is absolutely impossible. But you are doing it. I don't think it will end. Good luck with your next essay. Take love from your dude Mr.Trenzs .
I actually wrote the whole part and decided to cut in four pieces. I once wrote how the tool I used to write this is very helpful in writing a story fast. Even you can do it. Let me know if you are interested in an article about writing for the community. To me it takes more time to publish, upload photos as the writing itself.
Hmmm. It seems murder was used as a tool to put the kids out of their misery, huh?
Well, that is what I thought too after I read it but noooo it did not happen. Keep in mind who the monster is. He said he would give the children peace or?
Nice one @wakeupkitty that's why I always open my notif and waiting for your ARTICLES because I like how you write it and I understand it well.
Thank you for your compliment dear. I hope the story gave you some inspiration to write yourself.
Nice write up. I am new here, is it some novel summary or just an original creative writing?
This is a part of a series I write to join the contest @Ozzyy hosts. The deadline is Sept 19 which means you can join. 🍀👍
Ah okay. I will check it out. Thanks for informing.
This is quite a story with so many twists and turns that I needed to read and reread all the parts again to ask myself if this is the girl or if that is the guy. It is a brilliant plot. Each part can be read as different stories but they are all related. Amazing how your mind works.
Strange I answered you and it's gone! I didn't know what to write so decided to write one part of about 200+ words. I licked 20 prompts with the idea to use one for each sentence or so. It all became a bit longer than expected and while writing I noticed I can divide it in 4 parts. It wasn't me, those prompts made me do it. 🤫
Yah, I noticed that too. Sometimes I have upvoted but when I go back to the page, the upvote disappeared. Aahh... the prompts. I forgot about the prompts. Good that you did because the result is uniquely interesting.
Here's a bad girl like the one you described in one of your diaries. Mrs. Hypocrisy looks like the girl who invited you to her party and asked for the gifts she wanted you to give her.
Yes, I couldn't help but she popped up in my mind. Most likely you will meet more characters or situations since you are a good reader. A good memory you have too.
But you have a genius in your writing. Use many resources to make a good text. That's authentic, that's cool!