No way!

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They had to make sure that none of their colleagues noticed as they. The small chapel on the first floor was where they met.

There had been many theories about how she had been murdered and they were close about solving the mystery. The proof was inside.

Everything about her was a lie. It was a mystery to them how no one had figured it out. How long ago it had been it happened? Years passed by and not one single soul ever doubted.

"Rule the day" was written on the stone they gathered around. It hadn't been as difficult as they thought to find it neither to get the tools needed inside. No one ever seemed to visit the chapel. Spider webs made that clear.

"He waited until her husband was out of the room, then..."

It was clear to Ben what had happened. To him, there was no need to lift that stone and see the proof. He was the one who figured it out, knew long before.

"The kiss reminded him of chemistry lessons in school, when if the right two elements were put together, they'd explode"

His voice had never sounded that cold. The others stared at him and wondered what came into him.

"So far, the disease had cropped up in five different towns.."

Did Ben lose his mind?

"There's no disease Ben, stop the rambling you are mistaken! We are here to solve a case, a cold case. Are you still with us?"

Jen shook him at his shoulder while speaking, frowned and looked at the others. Was Ben losing his mind? He had a weird look in his eyes and didn't respond.

He'd never forgotten those teenage years. The promises she made, the lies, how she treated him, tried to rule him. The most beautiful and vibrant girl around.

More and more people were refusing to obey the laws of the landlords and she had thought she was different but he had seen her true face. The wolf in sheep's clothing... She ran, ran for her life.

As she stopped to catch her breath, she looked back at what she had lost. She didn't saw it come just heard the words whispering in her ear "you will never rule, good day".

Be a freewriter!

I kept it simple and tested it out and used 12 sentences provided by: https://writingexercises.co.uk/firstlinegenerator.php plus a daily prompt given on steer it which is "rule the day".

Here a freewrite only takes 5 minutes.

I wondered if it's possible to write a story out of 12 randomly chosen first sentences plus the prompt. Above your answer. If you like to give it a try to, please do so.

If you write it in ten minutes it's a freewrite if you need longer it's a short story.

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@wakeupkitty your writings are really awesome. Thank you kitty.

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4 years ago

Thanks for reading and commenting. I hope to write more if I feel not so cold and a bit better.

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4 years ago

Interesting Story. How does steemit work?

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4 years ago

You write and post. You need to engage (read and comment) others to be noticed. The more SP you have the more you can publish and comment. You can always read. The best start is to join contests to earn power and steel (cryptocurrency)

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4 years ago

The story line is nice👍

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4 years ago

The storyline is randomly chosen I only added some words at the end of each sentence. Strange isn't it?

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4 years ago

It's definitely a huge challenge! 12 random sentences? Even I haven't thought of something that crazy. But I guess I'll give it a try.

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4 years ago

I think if you use 50 you have a story too and don't need that many words to add at all.

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4 years ago

That may be true, but it'll be a whole trailer of work to make sure your story makes sense.

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4 years ago

I doubt it. It feels to me if they somehow are connected to each other. 🤔

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4 years ago

Hoping to be good writer like you someday.

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4 years ago

Try this tool and use the sentence given or better some more and make a story out of it. It's not that difficult.

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4 years ago

Seriously. My heart just started beating because of excitement and it's a cliffhanger type of story. What's under the stone? What disease? Who died? Did Ben kill the girl?

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4 years ago

Yes, he killed the girl and that's why he knew. As his friends decided to solve the case he felt trapped or who knows bad memories of a bad time turned him into a madman losing his mind. If no one lifts that stone we won't be sure what is underneath but my guess the girl and who knows some proof.

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4 years ago

You sure know how to write a good story. I don't need a storybook when I got you on the line. A compliment to you as a writer.

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4 years ago