It's clear

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The doll


Life isn't always easy and that is what Jim experienced. He sat in the dark and was forgotten. He had given up on trying to remember who he was and breaking his brains over how he ended up in a place where Dracula might survive but most likely couldn't escape either. As time passed by it became clear to him no one really missed him and there was not a single person that would come to his aid. He was surrounded by silence and dark and his stomach and intestines were the only ones who tried to make something clear to him. The end was near.

He played the recorder for the last time as he laid down on the cold floor and listened to the voices who sounded not so clear as before. His and the lady's, the lady he called Mrs. Gordon. She knew him, could take him home but she wasn't there. It was just him and the recorder that recorded something that didn't make sense to him but might to someone one day. Would someone ever find him, recognize him or figure it all out? He pushed the recorder deep into the pocket of his jeans and closed his eyes.

"You never know", he thought.

These were his last thoughts before he closed his eyes and gave up searching for a way out. The man who grieved two decades about the loss of a little girl faced the end of his life in the same way. Alone, in the dark but instead of a child's boot a recorder with an empty battery kept him company.

Prompt: not so clear

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His life is in total hell. For how long will he suffer thinking of her girl when seems no one believes him. But somehow there's a glimpse of hope in the story.

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4 years ago

Can be his suffering is over. I believe in the next part https://read.cash/@wakeupkitty/the-call-b052338d he doesn't smell that great. 🤔

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4 years ago

The first sentence got me really. 😔 I can relate with the fact that life is not easy. But here is the crazy part life is not so complex too. I have a friend who believes in simplicity, I always feel he is lucky. It always appears to me like he has no problems to face in life. But still my life is not equivalent to his , despite the fact that I try to be like him. This life is just not balanced.

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4 years ago

I guess his trick is he has no problems because he doesn't face them or simply ignores or doesn't see them as such. It does make life easier for sure.

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4 years ago

You never failed to impress me .Simple story but I think I read a lot from the beginning and upto the end.

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4 years ago

Thanks for reading. I appreciate it.

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4 years ago

Amazingly depicted the situation of a person who was abundant by his family and friends. Keep it up!

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4 years ago

Thank you.

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4 years ago

Nc

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