Hide or die

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Fire

It was clear there was no way out. He had stumbled around for hours in the darkness of the cellar. There was no lightbulb not even some light given by a skylight. He had touched the walls, crept over the entire floor in the hope to find a way out. Not one single window, door, handle, or hatch he had found. Confused and frustrated he hit against the walls till his hands bleed. There was no secret door. How did she end up here?

Exhausted he sat in a corner, nestled against the humid wall. He was too big to crawl between the bricks tones. Now he thought about it not even a mouse he had seen in here. Except for the humid smell that mingled with his blood and sweat this place was a good one to hide.

Hide or die, he thought. There's no fight or flight for me.

The only thing he could do was wait. There was always a chance someone would search for him, for Jim.

"Jim", he muttered, "you have a name and proof of something and someone will come for you. It's better to take a nap now. It must be late, late enough to be missed."

His stomach hurt but he didn't care. He would survive this and figure out who had trapped him and why. He curled himself up pressed his nose against the sleef of his pullover and fell asleep.

#kittywu #story #freewrite

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The continuation ❤❤❤ from intense to somber real quick though 😅

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4 years ago

It depends on the person what is quick. Waking up and not knowing where and who you are,touching the walls for hours? I am curious how long it takes you to get somber. Besides I doubt he is somber. Giving yourself a peptalk, taking a rest and prepare.... feelings come and go... how to keep a bit of sanity?

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4 years ago

Well coming from thd previous chapter of a fire with such a panic in the audience to suddenly being thrown in the dark though. It could come off as somber in a way that the mood suddenly drops and I'm not sure what he thinks could count as a peptalk, at least not to my views

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4 years ago

It depends on which story or line you follow. It was time to dig up Jim his dark adventure didn't end yet. Since I have no idea how to end it he needs to hang in there a bit longer.

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4 years ago

You take your time thinking about the ending, I'll just be a good kid and wait for it because i want to see what happens to jim. He could well be left to starve there but i don't think that's how you roll

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4 years ago

Poor one... Theres no other way out, its just hope you can cling on.

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4 years ago

Since there is nothing left it might help.

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4 years ago

The only thing that's left for her is hope. She's tired of searching so much for an escape and there is nothing there.

Terrible situation.

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4 years ago

Indeed there is nothing. It would make me wonder. Each place has something.

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