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4 years ago

Revenge


At the moment he decided to leave it felt as if he had spent ages with the woman. He felt exhausted. She had cried, talked, poured tea, cried again, and at least said a billion times she felt sorry. The only thing he had done was sitting, listening, and switching the recorder on and off. The essence of what she told was the same. Oh no, she didn't feel sorry or cared about his feelings neither what happened to his baby. All she cared for was the one who kept her. "He loves her, he told me he does even more than you do...", that's what the woman said and he hated himself he didn't manage to respond. He felt numb, dumb while staring at the tiny creature in front of him. How had she taken her away, made her come along? He didn't ask, the chief inspector had to end this.
He felt nausea and vomiting. Without a word he stood up and stepped towards the door. Before his hand reached the doorknob she stabbed him with a pair of sewing scissors in his hand. It was enough to surprise him and turn around. Good enough for her to hit him straight into his face with the baking pan.

Device: mobile phone

Egg timer: set at 10 minutes

Prompt: sewing scissors

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This is called killer instinct. And stab with scissors? where was the inspector questioning the person?

Anyway, I haven't followed this story from the beginning so I don't know many details.

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4 years ago

No knife at hand and "scissors" was the given prompt. It's always questionable where the police is if you need them.

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4 years ago

When you are a murderer, anything can serve as a weapon.

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4 years ago

Indeed. A pencil will do too.

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4 years ago

Is this an excerpt from a book? Thank you for sharing. Give a little more information.

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4 years ago

No this is a rewrite. Actually a story I write with given prompts, fitting in to certain communities as well because I had no time to join NaNoWriMo. The link above is what happened before.

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4 years ago

Is revenge is the first story?😁 I jump to this article first. Haha

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No it isn't the first. The link(s) left will guide you to an earlier part/the rest but it's fine if you only read this.

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