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The Broken!
The light coming from the window awakened her sleeping spirit. Why she wake up? Why not let the darkness swallow the already dead spirit? Over and over again. It was the same thing over and over again in her life. She's always been this way, she's been used to it, it is her life. The food served before sunrise will be eaten. Her taste in the herbs cooled her and her fish was as good as drowned. She doesn't know, it really does' if you feel alone, everything will make you worth even small amounts of vegetables and fish. She is Grace but her life does not fit her name. Is she the person I see now? The lips are about to burst because of the dryness, eyes swollen and crimson as a result of sadness wrapped around them, hair that blasts in conjunction with the problematic, broken heart that wants to give up. When are you awake? When are you going to get up? I know you were hurt before. Break your faith from childhood. You grew up with your mother who wanted to give up. You enter into relationships that are not right. You also try to destroy the lives and hearts of others from the weight you carry. Finding the supposed true love left suddenly. Depression swallowed and tried to forget until eventually forgotten. Grace, you're tired. Take a rest. I know you can't do it, we're just here, we're just here. If you think you have nothing to lose, here we go. I know you're tired of feeling, so come on, put it down. We will not leave you.
21 comments
Giving up, remains broken is not solution. In fact nothing can be a solution. The world is beautiful. We at least stand to enjoy the beauty of the nature.
Yeah that's true, take a break and enjoy the wind of our nature.
Such a nice post. Thanks a lot!
Thank you for the appreciation 😉
You seem like a very good writer. I live the kind of concept that's being used here. The way Grace refers to a lot of persons and not just one individual. This tells the story of what so many people are passing through.
Thanks for the appreciation and i appreciate it. And thanks a lot for the notice in my article :)
Your article is very unique. because we should know this article. it is very important for us. thank you.
Yes thanks for the appreciation on my article, i hope you enjoy my other articles :)
let the light of our loving father guide us all in the path were we all shall be. it is such a very meaningful article keep writing and inspiring others.
Thank you for inspiring you in my article, hope you enjoy and yes let the light of our loving father guide us and keep believing in him, everything has a reason and our father has a plan on our path :)
Yhea, i agree,, i dont care for some people who did not believe in God but the inportantant is we solid Faith to him🙏🙏
Yes just keep believing. Anyway thank you i enjoy chatting with you here especially when it comes the topic of our almighty God :)
Yhea thanks also, and your welcome!
good writing you are to enpire readers, but for me God knows for everything we just pray and God answered to what we needed God bless us 🙏🙏
Thank you. Yes that's true just keep believing in God everything has a reason and God has a plan :)
Yeah its correct, only God he knows for everything, Specally right now only prayer is the most powerful in this world to hear by our Lord🙏🙏
Yes because God has a plan for your/our all questions in life 😇
I wonder about this sentence "She is Grace but his life does not fit her name." Who is the "his" meant by? I can not figure it out.
I'm sorry for that, i didn't see that i write "his" instead of "her". I will editing right now. Thanks for the notice of my wrong :)
Nice, good story every moment of reading it was intriguing and suspenseful. I love how you have your way with words.
Thanks for taking out time to read my article, so much appreciated :)