@laraib
Half Alive
It’s true I am in pain, But no one sees it. It's true I can't tolerate it, But don’t want to share it, It's true I am not happy, But I have a fake smile, Its true people hate me, But I don’t have expectations, It's true I am alive, But I have no soul, It's true I am crying, But my lips have a smile, It’s true my mind hates you, But my heart loves you, It’s true I am in deep pain, But I can’t show you.
16 comments
What a horrible poem for love, Stop thinking him, Those who go never come again, Start living new life✌️ And look who is talking.
I think you know about it how much it is difficult to forget someone.
That's why I wrote LOOK WHO IS Talking
really it's "half alive". The title has gone to be perfect... And yes you are right...sometimes we face that very situations.....you have many things to say but don't....need to cry but don't.....this opposition brings diversity in human character.....loved the poem
I really don't you're title of poem it's very heart touching for me
Ovo.. Why so painful ??? 🙁🙁🙁 I have seen you for sharing sad poetry more often.. i can feel your words.😔 Well stay happy 🌸
sometimes our mind is feeling upset and we write it in the form of a poem.
Thats true...
Sometimes we have to go through the pain in order to get more happiness
Its so amzing piece of poetry. It shows your talent that how creative are you. Keep it up
Aahhh so painful and heart touching. Allah is with you. He will give you a peaceful life.
Woh Half alive. That was so amazing.
May you find ease in the pain 💜
I can feel your pain because sometimes I feel the same things. Stay strong. This phase will pass soon
It's the sad and heart touching lines. In life we get the pains but stay strong one day you will also be happy. Nice poetry write up
very heart touching lines and very well written dear