Lucid Dream

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You never talked to me

the same way I do to you

Your lips never spit sugar-coated words

the way others do

You never look at me

the way I look at you

Like I'm seeing the moon

kissing the Earth

You never think of me

the way I am doing right now–

and most of the times

like you are an unsolved puzzle

haunting me

You never speak of me to anyone

unlike me–

who speaks about you to my favorite persons like you are a dream–

Oh yes you are

One that'll never come true

You never loved me

You didn't

'cause you're wide awake

while I overslept

..dreaming

written : 01/21/19

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"'cause you're wide awake

while I overslept

..dreaming"

This line hit hard.

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3 years ago

😒😒😒

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3 years ago

You made me smile. It felt like that person is standing right in front of you. You just need a few second braveries to go and talk to him at least.

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3 years ago

Thank you, I actually wrote this for my crush but that was a year ago, I don't like him anymore πŸ˜†

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3 years ago

πŸ˜…πŸ˜… Did you ever let him know your feeling?

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3 years ago

No, he's actually a college crush. We're on the same college, but different course so I didn't really had a chance to talk to him. πŸ˜†

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3 years ago

I see. Thank you for sharing.

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3 years ago

You're welcome 😊 Thank you also 😊

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3 years ago

πŸ‘

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3 years ago

thank you πŸ€—

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3 years ago

That is an interesting poem. One that .any will make think. I hope some more people will read and reward you for this. The last sentence/ending is a strong one.... although... If the "I" was only dreaming it wasn't noticed what was really going on. @heartbeat1515 what do you say? πŸ‘πŸ’•πŸ€

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3 years ago

thank you very much for this 😭❀️

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3 years ago

your comment really made me happy ❀️

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3 years ago

And if I may say this, that's why the title is Lucid Dream, because in lucid dreams, the dreamer is aware that he/she is dreaming :)

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3 years ago

This is surely an interesting one. It reminds me of my younger sister, the one who is brave enough to express her feelings to the one she like without caring about the possibility to be rejected.

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And I admire your sister for her bravery πŸ€—πŸ‘β€οΈ

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