It was a gifted cat, or a stolen cat? (Part Two)

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4 years ago

She left, upset at the loss of her time and the deception of the message they sent her. But… what if it wasn't a hoax? What if it was the girl who lied? Could she love a cat more than the money they were giving as a reward? She would find out.

He returned to the house, but this time she didn’t knock on her door. She stayed outside watching the girl leave. But the door to her house was “hidden”; In front of the girl's house were some bushes, high enough to block the entrance, but Pamela was smart, she walked down the street as if nothing interested and suddenly she saw a place from where to enter the undergrowth, from there she would find a place to hide and to wait for the girl. She stayed there until Carmen came out with a bag, a wide bag. She looked around as if searching for something. She didn't see his young neighbor peeking out the door. He was unpleasant; he was like an old lady gossiping about everything and everyone around him. She didn't see what she was looking for and kept walking.

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And then suddenly a small cat stuck its head out of the bag, making Carmen smile, but it also brought a smile to Pamela who saw it all. What made the girl lie? Why didn't she want that reward? All these questions ran through her head.

She then decided to hatch a plan to rescue her cat. She didn't tell anyone what she was doing.

She spent several days watching Carmen's house, she looked for the most appropriate time and place to intercept her.

Pamela left her home; it was already close to 6 pm. She spent time inhaling her powder before leaving, which made her stronger, according to her. She took her bag with the things she needed and took a bus. She stayed in the direction she wanted and then walked towards the bushes that she already knew perfectly well, there she waited.

Carmen left around 7 pm; it was around that time that she usually goes to an old woman’s house. Said old woman lived alone and was 86 years of age, she was alone all day until midnight when her daughter arrives and stays with her.

She always came out at that hour, with her big bag, and her little Sphinx cat sticking her head out of the hole. Carmen felt a movement in the bushes and stopped, only to feel a strong blow to the head.

There was Pamela, right next to Carmen. The blow on her head was just enough to make Carmen fall over; Pamela pushed her to fall head-on to the floor, and then gave her two more blows on the head, just to make sure she wouldn't wake up yet. Pamela took her bag and hid the weapon she used. She took the cat out of Carmen's bag and put him in hers and then walked away, until she reached the bus stop and returned home with her cat.

She had bought him another bow, just like the one he had at the beginning, she removed all of the ads, all of the information about the reward. She already had her cat again and did not give any details about it. She forgot about Carmen and didn’t want to know anything more about her.

During all of this, on the other side of town, Carmen woke up just at midnight, groggy, with a severe headache, right behind her neck and sprawled in the bushes. She got up and cleaned herself as best as she could, and then headed home again. She no longer had her cat. He left just as he appeared in her life, suddenly.

What happened? She would not know. Someone beat her to steal “her” cat. She could have accepted the reward that that young woman who passed by talked about "Why didn't I accept? At least I would have some money…"

 

The end.

 

 

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Kind of brutal just for a cat though. I mean, the reward money would have been far more worth it than a head concussion

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If it's something that seems crazy. A rich girl loves her cat very much to that brutal point and more ... The other a poor young woman who never has anything and gets it, so she doesn't want to lose it.

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4 years ago

Well when the spoiled gets pissed they do unspeakable things after all. But the poor gilr could have gone to any local pet shelter to find unwanted cats if she had wanted one in the first place

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I don't think that was an option for her, otherwise this would not have happened. In fact, I wanted to end the story with more drama. Kill Carmen and cut her to pieces, but then I decided to just give one such lesson.

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I don't think a criminal record is needed just for a cat when the cat was unharmed and all. You've been thinking violently recently

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It is a case that happened in my country a few years ago. But I changed the plot a lot. The rich girl in question killed and tore the one she stole to pieces. I was a little more benebolent than what happens in real life. It is not a copy of the original story. Just the cat and the people. I just added new characters, drugs, and plot. It's real life, it's not my violent mind. I wish these things never happened.

You will continue to read more of these stories that come to my mind about things I read and thought shouldn't have happened.

The rewards are very good here for these stories.

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Nothing wrong with switching up your genre, i guess. As long as it satisfies you and the writer in you. But the rich there are rather crazy in your country to end up killing and dismembering someone. That's quite mental already

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4 years ago

Hahahaha and that this is just a similarity of a case that occurred. Wait for me to continue telling you similar cases.

Crazy if there are too many hahaha.

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4 years ago

I'm amazed at all the cases you've encountered in all your years in the medical field though. These cases are all fascinating, actually

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No. They are not all patient cases. The plots are imaginary, the pathologies are not. And I weave around them. This story of the cat happened in another way, in another context. Which ended in a vicious prosecution. That is why my story is different and ends with only one lession, not stealing, and taking advantage of opportunities because they come only once.

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4 years ago

Why not write about an actual case another time, describe it as is or is that violating the confidentiality doctors promise to keep?

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I have no cases that I can count from patients. I only saw patients in the ER with all kinds of situations that are the same as you see in the newspapers. There is no need to do cases of patients I have seen. I don't see why, if you see everything on the street. You just have to imagine the rest. I always said that after seeing and treating a patient I forgot what he said.

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4 years ago

Well you do know that there are a lot of special and unusual cases that never did get broadcasted or reach the people because of some certain circumstances or because of a media blockage, maybe you've encountered some of those

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4 years ago

When I remember I will let you know.

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4 years ago

Thank youuuu I'll be waiting for that >w<

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4 years ago

Great dear I have subscribed you

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4 years ago

Even though Carmen did suffer some injury, I'm happy that the story ended calmly and on a peaceful note rather than the bloody one I thought it would take. I did not expect this ending though, but it's nice.

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Hahaha were you expecting blood? I enjoy. That was my true end and even worse. I thought about cutting it into pieces and then decided not to do that to Carmen. I left her with a good blow to the head and a feeling of not being able to do anything. Because she found the cat and couldn't claim a stolen cat.

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4 years ago

Thank God you didn't make Pamela a psycho. All's well that ends well I guess

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4 years ago

It's the end? :<

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4 years ago

Amazing

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4 years ago

That cat is so gorgeous!! although to be fair, hairless cats shed skin-like flakes of saliva becasue it dries on their skin and peels off =S

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4 years ago

Great one

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