"Man to Nature"

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3 years ago

"Man to Nature"

the world was build with nature

it was peaceful and was nurtured

it was bright and beautiful

making the earth look colorful

when the man came

everything started to change

from fun to lame

and things started to feel strange

the places that was once filled with trees

is now furnished with buildings and houses

making the earth loses its resources

that makes the people develop deseases

the changes that man brought to the nature

made the place broken for the future

if the man knows how to protect and preserved

the world would still be nurtured

-Zai🍀

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Nice one, but I feel you are giving more emphasis on rhyming. And there is break in rhyming too.

And what I believe is poem are flow of ones emotions , not of rhymes. Only my personal opinion.

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