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Zai
Zai
3 years ago
"Man to Nature"
the world was build with nature
it was peaceful and was nurtured
it was bright and beautiful
making the earth look colorful
when the man came
everything started to change
from fun to lame
and things started to feel strange
the places that was once filled with trees
is now furnished with buildings and houses
making the earth loses its resources
that makes the people develop deseases
the changes that man brought to the nature
made the place broken for the future
if the man knows how to protect and preserved
the world would still be nurtured
-Zai🍀
Nice one, but I feel you are giving more emphasis on rhyming. And there is break in rhyming too.
And what I believe is poem are flow of ones emotions , not of rhymes. Only my personal opinion.