The ugly One

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Hello guys! This is @Xzeon at your service again🤣🤣🤣. Have a good day/night to all!

Today i will be a story teller for a while😁.

...pls read till the end and correct me if am wrong. Here it goes...

Once upon a time,In a flower garden of a wealthy man, lovely flowers at different colors and fragrance are having fun admiring their beauties and comparing it to one another.

"Look at my petals, they are so delicate and smooth as silk." Ms. Gumamela boasted to her fellow flowers.

"My flowers are sweet. Our masters daughters loves to sip the sweet juice of my flowers."Ms. Santan bragged also.

"Oh! Oh! Look at me! The lady of the house can't take her eyes out of me. I can see her admiration when she waters us everyday." said Ms. Rose who blatantly don't want to be out of the topic and she never did.

"My flowers are colorful too though they are fine but i bloom with different colors." Ms. Lantana tried to come along with the conversations.

"Hush! Ms. Rose suddenly interupt the discussions. You are colorful but is that what you only got?! You even don't smell fragrant, unlike me!

This scenario always happen everyday. Ms. Rose always stand out in the discussions and always wanted to be the center of attention.But everytime and every day also they tease the one separated from them, Ms. Orchid which is mounted on a tree near the group of flowers.

"Why is she always hanging up there? Maybe our master didn't like her much thats why she separates her from us." Ms. Gumamela said with a puzzled look.

"Oh well, you're right Ms. Gumamela, and look at her, she doesn't even have flower. What's beautiful in her? She's all leaves. Ms. Rose snickered and everyone followed.

Ms. Orchid on the other hand just kept quite and made herself her contented clinging to her host tree. Never insulted on her insensitive companions in the garden.

Days passed and the braggings and gigglings, annoyings and criticizing of the garden flowers continue. They teased Ms. Orchid even more.

One day, The master of the house' dog escaped from his cage and ran into the garden and began to trample the flowers.

"Ouch!" , cried Ms. Rose. What a bad dog! He's ruining my beautiful petals, "

" Me too, he's breaking my branches". He's ruining everything!". Answered Ms Gumamela.

Every flower in the garden just wailed in distress. Ms. Orchid just watched in horror but she can't do anything to help them. She just sob for the misfortune her companions.

Few days after.,one early morning the gardener came and started to cut the trampled flowers to replant again. Everyone are sad for the plight they are in.

Suddenly they smell something fragrant. It came from something they are not familiar with. They keep sniffing each other thinking its their own aromatic smell but realizing that they don't have flowers they just look at each other with bewilderment.

Meanwhile, the masters wife visited the garden and checking her flowers with great despair... Then with a quick glance, she turned her head and began to make a short gasp and excitedly squealed. She then stand up and ran to a tree nearby.

All the flowers followed their eyes to where their master would go. And suddenly all of them opened their mouth with great awe.! Alas! Who is that newly hanged flower with unique petals and glitters in the rays of the sun..!

Ms. Orchid.. Just opened her eyes from a beautiful sleep and disturbed by the scream of someone nearby. But upon opening her eyes she was astounded to find her master infront of her.

"Dianna! Dianna!" The masters wife called her daughter excitedly. " Come down here, and check this out! ."

"Wow! Mom, its the most beautiful flower i have ever seen.!" exclaimed the child looking above her with great admiration.

"Yes it is my dear, good thing she's in that tree and was saved from being trampled by Prince." the masters wife touched the speckled petals of Ms. Orchid gently..(Prince is the dog)

The flowers just bowed their head in regret for giving Ms. Orchid negative and cruel comments and thought ugly of her.

What is the lesson you learn in my story.? Kindly comment below. I'll appreciate every one who read this first composition of Yours Truly. 😊 I hope you enjoy reading!

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Great story, the moral lesson is do not judge other if you dont know them yet.

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👍 Yes because we use to judge other people even we do not know the inside of them.. Thanks dear.

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Yea, youre welcome dear💚

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Moral of the story: Every flower blooms in it's own time. Same with people, we should not feel envious of how successful others are. Never compare our life to those of others. People may be looking down on you or worst mocking you for not being successful at the moment but never stop doing your best and do it on your own pace and bloom at the right time.

This is a very inspiring story. Thank you for this ❣️

And thanks for the mention too. I didn't notice it because I was excited to write the moral of the story that I thought about 😅 You are a very good writer and though I can't give you that much right now, it's worth sponsoring you. Carry on with your awesome writing 💕

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You just got it right dear... ❤️😊 Thanks back for the valuable comment.

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Your welcome 💕 And can I make a suggestion? I don't mean to offend and I'm not trying to be a smart ass here but try to edit the last part where you use the phrase 'moral lesson'. It's either you use moral or lesson but you can't use both 😊 I hope you take this suggestion positively.

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Ok... No offense.. 😊

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Very well 🤗

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I'm always open for correction😊.. Nobody's perfect.. And thanks for the upvote😁

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That's the spirit! Keep it up 😊 There's always a room for improvement no matter how good we are. And the willingness to be corrected helps us to improve.

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Thanks for the motivation... 😊

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thanks for the mention... lesson:everyone has his own time to bloom..one may never know what tomorrow may bring.

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Nice one... I can see that we can find lots of lessons in just one story.. Thanks for sharing your thought😊

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Nice article dear thanks for sharing ❤

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And Thanks for reading😊

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You most welcome 💖

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😊

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