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My only wish I just have one wish in life, I don't need riches It is not my hapiness. @Dolores pls. accept this simple haiku wish of mine. 😘
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This is good, as a matter of fact. But, this is not a Haiku poem. Haiku only has 3 lines. ☺️
🤣🤣🤣 Ok.. I had it edited.. Is there something wrong again😁 tell me
3 lines not 3 stanzas. 😅 Haiku is just a one stanza poem with 3 lines.
I have provided example in my post😅
Yah i read it but i thought its considered as its free haiku writing so i added more🤣🤣🤣or its the syllables only 🤔
It can be in a free flowing style but based on what I have read, it must be 3 lines only.
Ok then.. 😊 I'm not contended with 3 lines 😁 seems incomplete to me.
That is the challenge in Haiku. Short but it concisely present an amazing thought and/or things.
It made me feel im in highshcool again... Can't think of best words within that just 3 lines 🤣
I really like your poem pls sub back
Thank you.. Done
That's a good haiku poem. I can't say more. I hope I can make poems as well. It's not my thing ever since. Back during my school days, my friends used to do it for me whenever we have to submit a poem for activities and projects lol
Honestly i edited it many times.. I'm not contented in just a simple limited words. 😅 At last i made it final..
lol that's how haiku is. A poem with limited words. I really don't enjoy reading haiku hahaha especially the original Japanese haikus translated in english 😏 I honestly can't read between the lines when reading those pieces 😅
Same here🤣🤣 but i want the challenge.sometimes translations gives different meanings than the original. 😅
Right and sometimes the original thoughts are distorted. That's probably the reason why i don't enjoy haikus 😅
What a nice and meaningful haiku. Atlast you got it good one😊. Keep up doing good work😊
I thank you very much for it. 😊
good luck on this, atleast you were able to write some.. 😊
😅 Busy e...
Congratulations and thanks for participating. ❤️😊🎊
Oops.. Sorry i've been very busy lately in the field 😅 i just come online.
Thank you for the oppurtunity.. Im looking forward to your next essay writing contest😊