@Winona
Unfathomable
Broken vases, broken vows Dying hope, sleepless hours Surreal delusions, countless flaws Unscathed egos, torned up clause A clear blue sky, soon a sunset hue We tried a bit more before we cried adieu A dreamy mirage, collapse from above We hang the ropes for things we called love A lethal dose of poison, a drift in the horizon Demanded escape in commitments we thought was prison Little white lies, harsh truths we barely believe What resides in the mind are the ones we can't concieve.
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Actions were taken, efforts were made, but that doesn't mean everything would all work out. It's concise. Thank you.
Wow, you made a great reflection about my poem, thank you. You like poems very much, I must say.
I like the rhymes so much keep it up 😊
Poem with depth meaning...
I hope I can be as descriptive and creative as you in writing, I can clearly see and feel what is written❤
Every poem of you makes my heart feel the pain 💔
It's always painful when you see that the person you met was not really the person for who he/she truly is. But even so you'll still try to make it work until it eventually falls apart.
Sleep might be better
You're right. I remember I've read something saying " when nothing goes right, go to sleep" . Hahahaha. Sleep might indeed be better haha