@Winona
Reality Sucks
Admit it You never felt like this before Distant, crying in close doors Admit it You never really liked the the rain Until you realized what the sky really has -just a way to express the pain You never really liked the gloomy weather But it's a get away excuse why wear that sweater Admit it You never really liked the beat It's the lyrics that got you hooked You played that song on replay It's the plot twist of that book Admit it You never really like the city lights at night It's the contrast Dark. Bright light. The dusts has settled. Time to go home. Go home. Admit it You tried but you're tired Meeting people, sea of strangers Flash of hope, drop of kindness You're here But you're hoping you're not You are awake Bu you hope to be in deep sleep Forget about them all Too much secrets to keep Admit it You hate everyone Everything. Because they just dont understand Admit it It's quite suffocating No strung if words can explain What's known is that You can't breathe freely Admit it You're rhymes are wearing off They start to rust Soon that poet will start to rot Admit it It's just too heavy sometimes You lost the perspective Chase it The more it runs away Wait for it Get stuck in uncertainty Admit it You like to sleep Because reality sucks. Admit it.
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I admit the last stanza. Instead of drinking, unusually sleep to forget about the harsh realities of life. Great poem. Where have you been?
Sleep fixes everything haha atleast sometimes. I've been busy with life this past few days. And I've gotta admit it sucks to put on this reality face again coz it's totally draining my being hahaha. damn I miss writing and I've got to practice my rhymes again. I hope you're fine. I haven't check on you guys lately. And probably I'd be off again tomorrow. Anyways, take care always. God bless
This is beautiful pain. (but then is paying ever beautiful?) Yes I'll admit everything. This relates to me on some days. I do hope you're alright
Thanks. Im doing fine, just putting myself on a different perspective but it rlly feels like that sometimes. I hope you're doing great too, take care.
Yes, I'm very much alright, thank you. Don't let it weigh you down dear. Be a fighter! 😉❤️
👏👏👏 wonderful keep it up
Thank you
haiist pain, pain and pain... but it's what makes us stronger after we overcome it,we just smile and laugh at it when we look back
Indeed. We just need to overcome it today. And continue waging the wars the next day. That drop of hope and the courage.