It Is Me

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4 years ago

This my second attempt at writing poetry. I would like to hear your opinions on it.


  • IT IS ME

It has been me 

It was me all the time

The recognition I sought

That I never actually got

It stung, I hurt a lot


It was me

It should have been about me

But I kept seeking for approval 

Which I would have never got

Unless I praised people a lot

For what they are and what they're not


Once they got what they want

My respect they shall grant

It should have been enough

But they asked for more

For a lot more than before

For them it was mandatory I become

Someone different from who I am


I couldn't help it at all

I deteseted myself most of all

For being as fragile as I was

It was me 

I made it happen

I was extremely mistaken

I allowed others to control me

I have let them define me


But I am done now

I have gone far too low

It will be about me

Not others but me from now on

Only then can I be at peace

And find harmony with in my soul

It will be about me from now on.

~Uzair Aziz

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Well well nice poem u have written amazing have a clap

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Thanks

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3 years ago

It was a nice poem

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4 years ago

Thanksgiving Dear

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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Thanks and already done bruh

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4 years ago

Please know that you have such talent and your words not only touch me, but so many here--keep writing, expressing and touching our souls...dear

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4 years ago

Excellent poem

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Thanks you so much Dear for your nice feedback

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4 years ago

Wow your poem is so wonderful I like your articles as well keep writing dear UzairCh

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That's great...you write like a real writer. Keep writing.

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