Dissatisfied heart.

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4 years ago

Dissatisfied with this blood transfusion

I want to touch you again and again,

If you are invisible for a while

Silent time is lost in vain.

Fresh leaves if inhaled

Invisible droppings,

Everything is confused with empty hands

Completion torn notebook.

Kadambini's roar feeling restless

Hillole turbulent waters,

North-south of Bichira to you

Or east-west.

Alik's unfamiliar footsteps are yours

Yours sincerely,

I will go to Achine suffocated

If I don't find you.

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There are few words that I do not understand. Could you add the description below your poem for easier understanding for me?

Overall, I like how you express the important of that someone in poetry.

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4 years ago