Angel Guardian - Chapter 1 Pag 3 / Angel Guardian - Capítulo 1 Pag 3
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COMENTARIOS
¡Al parecer no todo está perdido para estos dos angelitos!
Cuando hice esta página, no estaba muy segura sobre la ambientación que quería, así que no hice muchos detalles para dejarlo a la imaginación de quien leyera, aunque sí utilicé referencias de brillos para sugerir que podría ser cristal u otro material sumamente pulido...¿diamante tal vez? Tal vez si rehiciera la página, colocaría una viñeta adicional con un plano general del lugar.
En la escena de la pareja de hermanos, mi idea inicial era que la hermana atacara al joven con un cuchillo y él le pidiera que no lo hiciera. Luego pensé que, siendo dirigido para adolescentes tal vez visualmente hubiera sido muy fuerte, aun cuando en otras historias infantiles se ven casos de un hermano eliminando al otro (recordemos la pelea de Scar y Mufasa en El Rey León). Así que decidí sólo dejarlo como si lo iba a atacar con las manos desnudas. Tal vez fue una autocensura. ¿Ustedes qué opinan? ¿Creen que fue extremo cambiar la idea inicial o considerarían que está más ajustada para el público?
Y es mejor que Gersiel no deje hablar a Kyrsiel durante esta audiencia o puede terminar perdiendo sus alas y hasta su estadía en el Cielo si le permite expresarse a su manera :D
¡Hasta el siguiente artículo!
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COMMENTS:
Apparently not all is lost for these two little angels!
When I made this page, I was not very sure about the background I wanted, so I did not do many details to leave it to the imagination of the reader, although I did use gloss references to suggest that it could be glass or another highly polished material ... Diamond maybe? Maybe if I redo the page, I would put an additional panel with a complete shot of the place.
In the scene with the sibling couple, my initial idea was the sister would attack the young man with a knife and he would ask her not to. Then I thought that, being a manga for teenagers, perhaps visually it would have been very strong, even though in other children's stories you see cases of one brother eliminating the other (remember Scar and Mufasa's fight in The Lion King). So I decided to just draw it like she was going to attack him with her bare hands. Maybe it was self-censorship. What do you think? Do you think it was extreme to change the initial idea or would you consider that it is more appropriated for the public?
And it is better Gersiel not let Kyrsiel speaks during this audience or he may end up losing his wings and even his stay in Heaven if he allows his student xpresses himself in his way: D
Until the next article!
Disclaimer: English is not my native language. Even when I have a conversational level, I can make a lot mistakes in the structure of the sentences. Feel free to kindly correct me. It will help me in my learning process. Thanks for your understanding.
