Torment of want

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4 years ago

As I sit and wonder,

 Staring at those deep eyes,

 Waiting for her to say something,

 But not wanting to hear any words;


 I sat like a frozen man,

 Lost in the sight of her face,

 All I wanted was her arms around me,

 But not wanting to disturb her stillness at all;


 The way this wind caresses her hair,

 And they fall on her face,

 All that I wanted was the wind not to flow,

 But not wanting it to stop at all;


 She broke her stillness,

 And looked up as first raindrops touched her face,

 Filled me with a desire to cover her,

 Not wanting to find a cover at all;


 The rain drenches us,

 As we sat there silent,

 Doesn’t she look beautiful? 

 As I asked myself;


 I couldn’t help but admire,

 This placid torture,

 The pain of a desire..


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