The Dreaming leaf

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Swayed by the turmoil of the wind 

Leaf dreams as if her stem will snap

Swayed by the turmoil of the wind 

Leaf dreams as if her branches will snap



Wind blew like a gushing tornado

Skies emit a rainfall pushing and pushing

Leaf was tired but still standing 

Leaf was being blown away but still standing



Sun arose and shine it’s light 

The crowns of light emit warm rays 

Giving vigorous energy

Giving enormous synergy

As if the leaf woke up from a dream of storm 

As if the leaf become awake from the sun 

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I am impressed by this one. This is food for the mind and soul. 💕

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User's avatar wakeupkitty
3 years ago

Hmmm did you get the intelligence of the symbolisms my mind played with?

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago

this is a nice and peculiar tree and its leafs.it looks very beautiful. its shape,edge so different than other leafs.

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User's avatar Pabel
3 years ago

Hmmmm nothing is peculiar, only your perception

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago

I always see writing poems as something hard tho.. Like you guys have the time to think and write something lol

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User's avatar Rokay123
3 years ago

Me I don’t 🤔

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago

Wooow what a beautiful poematic ! Waiting for more news from you ! :)

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User's avatar Otsowamchodzi
3 years ago

Happy to inspire

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago

I have been reading this a number of times during 3 days, and the more I read it, the more I like it. Contrary to what someone else said here, I don't think it should be longer. Long poetry can become very strained. It's good as it is.

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User's avatar Mictorrani
3 years ago

Hey nice line. I think is kinda poem or so. Nice rhyming words. I can imazine the background of this poem. And can see what you want to say.

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User's avatar Abothe
3 years ago

Thanks, it is Poem

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago

Escribes tan natural que las palabras son como susurros en el viento que viajan y llega a nuestros oídos para suavizar los pensamientos con el calor del Sol.

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User's avatar Tiberius
3 years ago

las palabras se canalizan a través de la inteligencia

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago

this is very nice. i like it. but i think you should work on making that longer a bit more

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User's avatar hamedbkh
3 years ago

Haha I’m doing it fast

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago

lol really? well you have a talent obviously! just work on it. you are good already

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User's avatar hamedbkh
3 years ago

I am planning to make some novel 🤔

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago

interesting! what kind of novels? i would say romance if i had to make a guess haha

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User's avatar hamedbkh
3 years ago

Still deciding.

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago

okay. good luck! i hope i will be able to read it as soon as possible :D

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User's avatar hamedbkh
3 years ago

I despise romance, for me it’s full of manipulation and control.

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago

well actually i hate romance too! but i'm kinda surprised that you despice it. i might be wrong but i can feel some romance in your articles.

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User's avatar hamedbkh
3 years ago

Nice poem.. Words on point, with good rhymes, you can check mine tho, I guess I'd go into writing poems.

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User's avatar Rokay123
3 years ago

Ok sure

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User's avatar Monskins
3 years ago
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