Happiness

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4 years ago
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Like something from deep within your heart

Some kind of unlimited feeling known to you alone

You just don't see those who have broken your hearts

Some kind of feeling well known but yet known to you alone

Something that seems to you what no kind of money can ever buy

Cos you have it when you don't have the things that money can ever buy

Buried deep down in you, you know you can still have the things that money can ever buy

So it's something that money can never buy

It seems the only thing you have especially when you gather with friends that have riches

Your only assurance even though your rich friends assures you

Your lifetime insurance because you know contentment is the key

A well known secret but yet know to you alone.

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When you talk about Nigerian police officers, it makes me laugh. They are so dirty and uncouth. They mesmerized and corrupt the nation. They do all sorts of illegal things under the aegis of law enforcement agency

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User's avatar Ali5511
4 years ago

happiness is an emotion can been controlled... you choose to be happy and you choose not to be happy. Happiness is a state of mind. What makes others happy might not make you happy.

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User's avatar phavvy
4 years ago

You started well, really strong, with this poem but from the 5th line on you seem to lose track. Each sentence is nearly the same end ends the same with "buy". In the case of this poem, it doesn't add anything.

Reread it and see if you can change a bit. Grammarly might help you because it gives you synonymous words too.

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User's avatar wakeupkitty
4 years ago

You cannot find happiness to others it must comes from yourself. And your right contentment is the highest form of happiness which is rare to human beings, because we ought to want more and more in life if we achieve something. So if you have contentment then, your a great person!

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User's avatar Eybyoung
4 years ago
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