@JasmineC
Unbreakable Promise
When you came, my life blooms It takes away the part of gloom And helps me live a life that hopes the light Where tears are fallen and keep things right I thought you've forgotten the love of forever I thought you'll leave me as the love goes deeper I have questions unanswered That only you do tampered I will stay right here where you left me I will never go somewhere even in glee Because I am certain that you will never missed And never will forget our unbreakable promise
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I really like this article of yours and found it very amazing. This story of yours was unique . thank you for writing such a beautiful story among us.
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Truely bee I never believe in promise. Because for mi promise meant to be broken. Keye huwalang forever only hearafter.
It is meant to be broken if you chose to break it, but it's meant to be kept id you chose to keep it. Life is really a matter of choice.
Nothing is unbreakable...dont think much about life,relationship.just let it go.life itself is a very beautiful thing.promises are made to break
Thanks! Don't worry everything I right doesn't really mean that's who I am. Those were written works for us to reflect and learned of. Sure enough that it's not about me.
Good one there, in fact very nice piece. Sometimes I hear others saying promises are meant to be broken but I aske myself if promises are meant to be broken, why then do we promise in the first place. We need to fulfill what ever we are meant to do.
Yeah, promises are made for us to remember the reason why we strive to do more, and it's a reason why we have to be hopeful.
Promise is not mean just said but to be proved.. Ur post is about promise.. Keep write the article.. I support u
Thank you for the support. I am happy that you are there to support me. Indeed, promise is meant to be proved and not said.
indeed this poem was so good! keep doing great.
Thank you! I will be writing some more articles to inspire you more. Keep reading and be inspired.
looking forward for more poems to read from you.
Thank you! I have many articles to be published yet. As of today, I did not publish many because I got busy with some other things. You can expect more articles from me.
Love stories, truely amazing, every time I see such, it never gets old. I like the fact that yours is poetic. Very nice work. Keep it up.
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