The Love I Gave

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Love is awesome and Good to see two people in love 😍. Though, there are still many who are unfortunate with love, but let's leave the story for another day.

I’m actually a business enthusiast but I don’t think writing ✍️ about love is a bad thing. 

Here we go; 

A boy and a girl were once best friends. They could talk and talk all day long, spending all their time on the phone.

And when they talk to each other it is like everything is perfect and nothing was ever wrong in the world, they could never be unhappy or sad in every moment they spent together.

On one faithful day, the girl texted the boy and she had no reply which was most unusual. She tried again but same. Finally, she called him but there was no answer.

The whole day passed and the boy was not available through phone or text. The girl started getting worried that something terrible was definitely wrong.

The following night, the girl was sleepless and stayed up all night worrying and crying. It was then she realized just how much the boy actually meant to her.

The next morning however, her phone ranged. It was the boy! She was so overwhelmed and as soon as she picked up the call…

Boy: Hi!

Girl: I’m so glad to hear from you, what was wrong?

Boy: I… I was… busy.

[The girl knew that something was off but she couldn’t ask.]

[silence]

Boy: You know what, we should stop this. We shouldn’t talk any more.

Girl: [stunned silence] What? Why?

Boy: Sorry. Bye.

[Boy cuts the call. The girl cannot believe it, it’s as if she has lost a part of her.]

All their past conversations started flashing in front of her eyes.

She started crying, tears were streaming down her face.

She was lost and confused.

She felt broken, sad and alone.

She was standing on the roof and wanted to jump.

He was the one for her, why had he done that?

“Why?!” she yelled as loudly as she could from the roof.

Then she decided she was going to try and win him back.

[She called him again)]

Girl: Hey

Boy: Why  did you call me?

Girl: I need to say something.

Boy: Go ahead.

Girl: I wanted to say just one thing…

[Her voice choked. “He doesn’t care about me,” she thought.]

Boy: Say it!

Girl: Are you okay?

[Silence]

The tears were streaming down her face again. She hung up, and decided to write a note and ran out of the house with it.

[Six hours later]

[Phone rings in boy’s room]

It’s the girl's mom. She tells him that the girl got hit by a car when she was on her way to see the boy and that she’s admitted in the hospital.

The boy rushed to see her.

He reached and took her name, she opened her eyes.

Boy: Please be okay, I’m so sorry.

Girl: Why did you do that?

Boy: I have a heart condition and I don’t have many days to live. I didn’t want to hurt you.

Girl closes her eyes, never to wake up again.

Boy could not believe this had happened because of him.

10 minutes later, the boy gets a heart attack and dies from grief.

The love I gave; hope you like the story? Let me know in the comment section



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3 years ago

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That's just tragic. I hope it never happens to anyone.

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3 years ago

We pray so...😍

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3 years ago

How sad, the ending that was. But perhaps they will meet in another world as @McAdeleye commented :D

Love is a magic we all go through in life and how one perceives it differs from another. But it all goes down to making each other happy but doesn't always happen :)

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3 years ago

Yes....we hoping so too😍

Just like one feminist who always tweets radically...once she finds love, the story changes; love is truly magical 🧙‍♀️

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3 years ago

True, it changes people in the most unexpected ways :)

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3 years ago

Smile. This was just so interesting Maybe I say they continue their love in the other world. Hehehe.

Such is something about love. We would always want to love with all our hearts and never want to hurt each other. True love like this are rare nowadays

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3 years ago

Very rare my brother....only legends like you still know your ways around

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