Watch 3

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 [WP] At 18, your father finally gave you his antique Swiss watch. "The watch will stop working when you're seconds away from death. Live a good life", your father always told you. Now at 26, you're celebrating your 1st wedding anniversary. As your wife pours you a glass of wine, the watch stopped.

Chapter 1

Chapter 2


"We need to get out of here-" 

"But there's no way out" 

"The fire exit" Reiner’s gaze frantically shifted between the now hole-filled wall then to the door which was the source of stomping feet.Adrenaline and fear overruled his thoughts. He grabbed Lindsay's hand then pulled her to the direction of their room. That was where the fire exit was. They both thought they would manage as soon as they got onto the railings but as soon as they opened the window, something struck both of them on the arm, small needle-like items. There wasn't much time to inspect it but one thing was sure, in a matter of seconds, whatever was in those small needles was the cause of it. The next minute, they were still trying to climb out the window then they were both collapsing on the ground with their visions fading to black. The last thing they could remember was the sound of the door breaking and the feeling of being hoisted up. After that, nothing. 

When Reiner had come to, he wasn't even sure if he was really awake since everything was still pitch black. The only thing that could assure him of consciousness was the murmurs that erupted whenever he struggled to move and the cold that touched the bits  of exposed skin whenever he moved.  

"Where am I?!? Where's my wife!" He was panicking, it seemed like he was strapped down on some board and no amount of struggling seemed to work against whatever restraints held him down.

"You, Reiner Bruno, Are in custody for possessing stolen artifacts. The prediction 

watch. You need not worry about your wife. She's safe. Still resting but she's innocent" 

"Prediction watch?! You must be kidding me. That crappy watch is nothing but a curse!" He was growing livid with the person's claim on the watch that he still believed was the cause of his father's death. 

He was about to continue on with how it was nothing but junk but before he could say more, his blinds were removed and the blinding white of both the light and the room made him groan. " You just don't know the full extent of the watch" The man turned the dial that indicated the minutes and what shocked him was the flash of light showing small screens. Nothing like that ever happened when he was tinkering with it years back. "These, young man,are the possible futures this watch can predict. It seems knowledge on how to use it wasn't passed down your family."

"Is that what my father saw" 

A sinister grin stretched upon the man's lips and what he said was something Reiner wished he never heard. "No boy. That was me trying to steal back this watch. I admit that after that, you did an excellent job hiding but this is the end of the line for you" He threw the watch towards him and as Reiner glanced to the watch by his feet, he could see that the watch was still at a stop" 

"It still tells the user when they die" 

When He looked back up at the man, he could see the hand gun held snuggly in his hand 

"Oh. And I lied about one thing. Tell your wife a hello for me on the other side" 

His eyes widened and before he could say more, his head was thrown back with a bullet now lodged in between his eyes. 


It's doneee!!!! Now I'll be going back to one-shots for a while and I hope I can draw again this week

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Hahahaha, mapaoanura na sana ako, ang ganda na ng mga pangyayari tapos panira ung ending, masyadong masakit 😤😐. My gosh takot na takot syang mamatay dahil sa clock pero hindi pala un ang papatay sa kaniya kundi mismong tao 🙄. Sabagay lahat naman mauuwi din sa kamatayan, una una lang.

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3 years ago

You don't mess with secret organizations kasi!!! They'll kill you no matter if you cooperate or not, that's how they stay a secret UwU i thought i made a good twist to this though so I'm still happy with the outcome

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3 years ago

Haha, kaya di sila na didiscover kasi may motto ata sila ma "Once you know our secret, we have to kill you" ganorn. Looking for more story 🤩

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3 years ago

Same thoughts, kaya the plot twist was good. And it still followed the prompt so it's all good UwU

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3 years ago

It's really good, dapat kasi nag papublish kana ng book, self publish sa amazon ata pwd yan 🤩

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3 years ago

This would need more detail if in the case though. I don't know other platforms i can publish stuff on

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3 years ago

Maganda book, tapos naka imprint name mo doon. O diba bongga, kaso need lang na mahaba ang chapter.

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3 years ago

Mahabang chapter, i can do but looking for another writing platform, well bahala na si batman 😂😂😂

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3 years ago

Yun lang, pero sa watty pwd na ata kumita doon ah. Kasi may coins feature na din sila pang buy ng chapter na naka lock.

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3 years ago

I haven't checked yet, i was thinking of going with dreame because i used to read there

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3 years ago

Yan isa pa din yang Dreame, may pacontest sila awan lang kung meron pa till now malaki din prize.

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3 years ago

Meron pa but then the word requirements has me thinking pero parang kaya naman

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3 years ago

Oh, why not try?

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3 years ago

Because minimum of 30k words per story sa dreame. Idk sa wattpad

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3 years ago

that was it?I did not read the first 2 so am. gonna go check em out.. 😁

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3 years ago

It was a long thinking process this time. I really enjoyed this prompt tbh

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3 years ago

So mannyyy twists and it still ended in tears 😭😭😭

Who are these mtfkrs and why did they have to kill him>

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3 years ago

I wanted to make them an organization that collected unique artifacts but i forgot to add those lines in 😂😂😂 i was just way too satisfied with the train of thought

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3 years ago

I know right? That would have been really nice, but then it would have made this story more deserving of some more chapters.

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3 years ago

Just longer but not guve it more chapters. I don't think my brain could have kept up with adding more chapters 😂😂😂

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3 years ago

Oh my dear God, what a tragic end! I did not expect this. That would be the last thing that boy thought with so many truths revealed at the last minute.

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3 years ago

That's their way of tying up lose ends. Their organization needs to be kept secret and so do the artifacts

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3 years ago

I was really amazed and I congratulate you on that creative capacity of yours.

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3 years ago

I was also amused when the inspiration struck me 😂😂😂

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