Normality? I want that

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4 years ago

[Prompt] Write a story that revolved around a kind, compassionate character and then make them evil in the last sentence


Living in the slums was enough to make anybody lose all traces of humanity at times. Aside from Carl’s living conditions, his father was one that could not survive without his regular doses of drugs now and his mother… his once kind and beautiful mother was but an empty shell he could no longer recognize. Bruises and cuts adorned her features. They say his father was a potential boxer until he suddenly had a losing streak. First it was alcoholism then he resorted to drugs that he would inject in his system every few days. Carl couldn’t even remember the time his father was ever sober and a time when his mother wasn’t beaten to a pulp. This didn’t stop him from wanting to study though.

At times he would escape to visit his grandmother that lived not too far from the school he was studying in. Despite her hatred for his father, she cared for Carl at least and felt great dismay for her daughter. There in that house, Carl would hear stories of what normality was. How his mom was when she was normal and he was taught how kids his age would normally act. 

At school, Carl was the ideal student, good grades, helps his classmates and was even active in a club but at home, he wished nothing more than to experience the normal his grandmother would tell him about. 

One afternoon, while Carl was walking home, a group of ambulances was at their house. He heard that his father had died of overdose. He could only show the people how blank his expression was and the people did decide to leave him alone because of that. And thus started his life alone with his mother. They were far more peaceful in his point of view and he had earnestly hoped that his mother would eventually show any expressions on her otherwise blank face. But then one day, as they were having their meal together, she simply stood, went out the door then left. 

It was pretty normal for such things to happen, after all and even after three days passing, Carl still hoped that his mother would return. He mostly visited his neighbors that were his classmates to help with homework and such to keep himself distracted but to no avail, he would at times still cry over having been abandoned by his mother. Even the mother of the other kids would wonder why such a kind kid would have to suffer at such a young age, especially when he’s been helping their kids out as much as the child could. 

It had been nearly a week since the disappearance of his mother and news seemed to reach his school, and ultimately his grandmother. Unfortunately his grandmother wanted him to live in an orphanage seeing as she would not have enough time to raise him given her age. Carl said nothing and simply went to the kitchen to get something and naturally his grandmother simply followed. That was her mistake. “I wanted to live normally, mami. I thought killing that b@st@rd of a dad would work but no! And now you want to take me to the orphanage? You deserve to die next!” The next thing that came on the news was of an old lady that had died of overdose and was said to be affiliated with the first overdose case. 


You know how what seems normal for you may not be normal for other people? He was jealous of other people's normal yet what was normal for him now was the violence.

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He just did what he thinks is right, we can't blame the kid. He want a normal life but he can't have it because one, his environment. Everyone who is living in a place that full of violence may adapt by a kid. Does he continue killing people? Like he can't function well if he don't kill evwn just once.

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4 years ago

That's how the circle of violence works and in this case though, no matter how much he wants that normal of his, i don't think he'll get it when violence has been the only normal he's ever received so yes, more or less he'll keep on killing until he gets what he wants or gets that mental help

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4 years ago

Yeas, that's what's normal to them. I don't think he'll ever change. Not unless he feel loved, there's a chance that, if he fall in kove with a woman. But, he may become obssess if that's happen so maybe not a good idea also. He will just kill more if the one he love has no feeling for him at all.

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4 years ago

Love could change some things but probably not everything. I think he'll need a really loving woman who would really guide him through and through but since he might actually end up in an orphanage. Who knows what his future would be ;-;

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4 years ago

Wooooooh. Guess he's going to have to get used to a new normal.

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4 years ago

Yeah but i think he'll eventually start looking for that same violence eventually since that was the normal he grew up with

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4 years ago

Everyone has their own definition of normal - we're all unique human beings so I don't see why a standard should be set, especially since people that set the standards bring their own prejudice into it.

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4 years ago

Yeah but you know how your normal comes off as weird even to you and on an outside perspective, you'll see other people being "normal" or at least behaving on common norms yet you can't even manage to do or experience that? It really messes with your head a lot

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4 years ago

If only we knew how everyone else also felt about us

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4 years ago

what is normal at all? Who has the right to determine what is normal and what is not? People are different, they have their own world of emotions, thoughts, moral principles, way of functioning, view of the world. So we must not always react in our own way, we need to understand the other person as well. But, killing is a crime.

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4 years ago

True that is but you do get that having beatings alnmmost everyday and at an early age no less, will definitely trigger a few things in that child and I'm sure it was what caused the violence to begin with. We never do know what triggers killing anyways but for him, he simply wanted change

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4 years ago

Nice one. But I don't know what to say. Good thrilling story😅😅

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4 years ago

Hello spooktober ❤❤❤ that's all i can say UwU! I've been enjoying these prompts from reddit. I wanna write about the tests we do at work soon

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4 years ago

I pity the normal child becomes an evil one because of hatred. He doesn't deserve to experience it. 😢

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4 years ago

Wouldn't call it hatred but more on jealousy since the kid just wanted to live a normal life like any other kid that gets to play out bit he doesn't get to in their household and i do think kids avoid him out of fear of his parents

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4 years ago

I think its not too late for him to change. I am wondering where did he go now.

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User's avatar Yen
4 years ago

I'd like to think that in the end, social service came and helped him recover since I'm sure people around his house would notice the silence in their house

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4 years ago

waiting for part 2

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User's avatar Yen
4 years ago

Oh i didn't plan a part 2. This was just a short story for the prompt XD

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4 years ago

My god. It must be the bad influenced by his surroundings... But a young kid killing? That's horrible..

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4 years ago

That or he just simply snapped. It's rather sad too

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4 years ago

Harbored feelings of bitterness and anger led him to do that outrageous act. What he did is a crime but we can't blame him for resorting to it, blame his parents.

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4 years ago

There's no one really to blame else everything would be blamed. Blame his granma cuz she told him about a happy life, blame his mom for marrying his dad. Blame his dad for wasting his life, blame himself cuz he couldn't change anything even after killing people. Who would even take the blame?

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4 years ago

And that's the sad reality 😪

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4 years ago

To me it doesn't feel he was jealous. All he wanted was a kind of normal, safe home. If you ask me that's not too much asked and that granny is a lousy one.

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Can't say the granny was lousy though. She probably did what she could to stop the mother or separate them plus she was getting old, after all

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