A Sonnet Titled "Don't Look Down"

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4 years ago

Take to your heart thy father's sound advice,

So thy names be written, up the sky.

Give not to old success' room to entice,

If the whole heavens, is thy plan to buy.

Run out swift and quickly from comfort soft;

The beckons to slumber; to butter and ease.

Brace thy heels further, no matter the cost

The broken hedges, the borrowed fees!

If so told, that you fell off this sayings,

Not so! that thou looked to past wins.

For her kiss pushes great men to

Singing,

Whilst the harvest dance is yet to begin!

Still set thy goals, towards the yellow sun,

Though in climbing, thou might miss the sole fun.

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Lovely. It is not easy to write a sonnet. I believe that there is some technique of writing one but I am not familiar with it. You submitted this to the wrong community because Share Some thoughts stands for values. I can have this in my other community which is a home for poetry.

I do have strict moderating in each of my community. If you would like too, you can submit it here.

https://read.cash/c/syt-poems-bd19

Maybe @wakeupkitty @ozzyy @gertu13 @marblely would like to read this. @hanzell could this inspire you for a new drawing?

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Thanks. Even though I'm not a poet myself, I do appreciate a good poem. Hers is quite nice.

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Thank you for stopping by.

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You're welcome

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thank you I already read it and gave my support. In fact, I'm not very good at poetry.

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You sure are good in taking care of your plants. Thanks for reading.

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You're right! I am a specialist in them, my plants. Thank you for asking my opinion, always available to support.

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I know you are 🥰. Thank you for stopping by.

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Okay, thank you.

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