The Twist...

37 60
Avatar for George_Dee
3 years ago

This is something new, I didn't have much to deliver for an article so I decided to continue where @Princessbusayo stopped her article titled "I MADE A MISTAKE OF MY LIFE"

The story was about the story of a lady who fell in love with a guy, the love was strong until she got pregnant. The guy pretended to be happy about it but he lied, he started showing attitude and that was how the relationship ended. She got rid of the pregnancy and vowed never to love again.

I got tired of giving my heart to anyone since the last relationship crashed", this was Nancy's last words as she ended the call of her new admirer.

(Admirer, I think it is worth her screaming at any man that comes her way but let's read before judging the new guy).

George is an aeronautic engineer who lives in Edo State where Nancy was posted for service, she was really happy she was posted far away from home because of what happened between her and Cole, at least the new environment would make her meet more people even though she wasn't ready to be serious with anyone.

George and Nancy met at a store where they came to shop differently, they bumped into each other mistakenly. Nancy got mad even though she was at fault, she has been harsh towards men since Cole left because she believed all men are the same.

Unfortunately for her, her phone dropped into the stranger trolley when they collided. She didn't know until she got home and George tried to catch up with her but she was too quick to enter the cab that brought her to the store.

He was waving the phone but she thought he was trying to take her number so she just ignored him. George hopped into his jeep but couldn't catch up because a delivery truck blocked his car and by the time he was able to move out, the cab had gone and he couldn't guess which road they went through. It was 9 pm already, he decided to park at a bar and waited if she was going to call or probably return to check the store for the phone.

On getting home, Nancy screamed and started trembling when she discovered her phone was missing. She ran to her mate who also came for service to help her call the phone, George was dozing already when the phone rang but he picked up before it stopped ringing.


Nancy: Hello, please the phone you are receiving this call belongs to me. I am the lady you just dropped off.

George: Good evening madam.

Nancy: Good evening sir, please I will pay you for returning the phone. I have lots of important documents there. (she started praying for the receiver)

George: I am not the cabman, I guess your phone dropped in my trolley when you bumped into me at the store about an hour and a half ago at the store in the City square.

Nancy: Thank you, can I come and pick it now?

George: It is dangerous for a lady to move around this late, just tell me where you stay and I will just drop it off. I have been waiting for the call that's I hang around the store.


Nancy was reluctant to give her address but she ended up giving it to George, he checked his google map and set off. It took time before he could locate the Corps lodge but thanks to the help of the shop owners in the area that guided him.

She was waiting hoping he wasn't deceiving her. He horned twice and she ran outside to see who came around, it was dark so she couldn't see his face properly but George recognized her. He handed over the phone and apologized for what happened at the store earlier. Nancy was shocked because she knew she was at fault, she apologized and thanked him a lot.

George asked if they could talk some other time and she gave him her Facebook ID because she didn't want anything serious with anyone.

They started communicating there and Nancy later gave her number, she always acts stubborn just to prevent George from asking her out because his action was telling already.

George couldn't help it and he asked her out because he was deeply in love with her, Nancy didn't give a response but she was ready to help George spend his money. He didn't hesitate to give her anything and even sponsored her weekend vacation several times with the hope that she was going to consider him one day.

On this fateful day, they went out together as usual. Nancy had too much to drink that she lost control of herself in public, it was too late to let her be alone so George took her to his apartment. He took care of her clothes and gave her a cold bath just to make her feel good, he placed her on his bed while he went to sleep on the couch. She woke up at midnight to find George sleeping on the couch, she squeezes herself into his arm, and cuddling started. They both got in the mood and had sex, it was like a dream come true for George because he knew that was automatically a yes to his love proposal.

Fast forward>>>>>

Nancy started seeing signs after few weeks and knew she was pregnant even before going to the hospital. She was scared to tell George because he could disappear just like Cole did but she summoned the courage, picked up her phone, and sent a text.

George didn't call or reply to her, he went straight to a bakery to get a big cake. He got some wine as well and went straight to her place, she couldn't believe he was happy about it and they both had a great time indoor planning on the next step.

On getting home, George got a call from the headquarters. He needed to go and work somewhere in a neighboring country, it was late and he didn't want to disturb his lover who was already sleepy before he left so he went straight to catch the night flight at the airport.

While he was moving his luggage, he forgot to pick his phone from his car safe. He parked the car and locked it somewhere in the airport since it was a few days' trips.

He landed in South Africa before daybreak and it was then he realized he didn't take his phone, too bad he didn't know Nancy's number off hand. He waited till morning and got a new phone and Nancy, on the other hand, has been calling and she was already assuming that she has been dumped again.

George got a small phone just for call and tried reaching her immediately he found her number in his diary but she wasn't picking the strange call because it wasn't a Nigerian number, she thought it could be scammers since they are operating very well and duping people

She was worried just like George. Finally, the phone George left here wasn't reachable anymore because the battery went off. He stopped trying to reach her because he finished the job earlier than expected and was waiting for the pilot to test the flight before he leaves back for Nigeria.

Nancy went to his house every day and on the fifth day, she went straight to the hospital for an abortion because she thought George disappeared because of her. She was turned down by the hospital and she met a nurse secretly to do it for her.

After the abortion was successful, she put her phone in airplane mode before she slept off for over four hours at the nurse's secret hospital. She woke up to see series of messages on her phone from George after turning off the airplane mode. Nancy couldn't believe her eyes with the last text that said, "baby I am sorry, I didn't know things would go like this". I know you aren't picking up because you are mad at me, I promise to make it up to you and I will be at your place in few hours. I am driving home now.

Nancy burst into tears, she managed to find her way home because she wasn't feeling great after the abortion. It has been over 2hrs since George texted her and surprisingly, she met him sitting in his car outside the house when she got home.

Immediately she saw him, she fainted. What next? I challenge @olawalium to continue from where I stopped.

Image source.

9
$ 5.54
$ 5.29 from @TheRandomRewarder
$ 0.05 from @Jane
$ 0.05 from @Princessbusayo
+ 4
Sponsors of George_Dee
empty
empty
empty
Avatar for George_Dee
3 years ago

Comments

This is saddening. Nancy shouldn't have taken such harsh measures so quick. I know she's damaged due to previous experience but don't we have single mothers surviving out there? . Never be in a haste to abort a baby. Never... let's see what happens next.

$ 0.02
3 years ago

Yeah, everyone blamed her but she was trying to play safe. She probably wasn't ready to be a single mother, life sometimes can be really unpredictable.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

So this is the story before Ola's haha..i'll gonna read princess' now

$ 0.02
3 years ago

Yeah, we can't of made the continuity open to someone else. I hope the next person take the challenge, I hope you enjoyed reading?

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Nice story and Ola did take your challenge. He had a good continuation story.

$ 0.01
3 years ago

I saw it earlier and was amazed about how he handled the story.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Same here.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Hoh ! George should have try to text her earlier with the strange number or even drop a message for her on facebook, because ladies are not always patient as we think, they always want things done immediately so heart broken πŸ’” That she abort the pregnancy before his arrival can't wait for the continuation great work πŸ’ͺ

$ 0.05
3 years ago

Yeah, I wished he did the same. We are bound to make mistakes in life and there are times when things wouldn't just go as planned for us.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Thanks alot ❀️

$ 0.00
3 years ago

I am really worried to read this, because its the usual thing happening these days. People only fall in love just to have physical relation and once it done , they left. You made it versatile and believe me its too good. wanting you should continue it , well lets see other mate's story Ayat Greets you ...

$ 0.05
3 years ago

Fatima?

It hurts a lot when trust is broken and when it is broken after you struggle to build it again, it becomes.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

yes , Ayat Fatima ..last account got into spam so i am here.. I am second to you on this , but this trust cant be build again once it broken with the same person

$ 0.00
3 years ago

No na! Nancy why would you just conclude that way? 😭😭😭 At least she saw George brought a cake and was even happy about it. Well, I wouldn't blame her much because that was how Cole did and betrayed her. But that doesn't mean she should abort this and think all men are the same😣😣

George would be pained oo @Olasquare come and complete this story, it's getting interesting and I trust you to make the next part more interesting πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ

$ 0.06
3 years ago

Hahahahaha lobatan. God will help me πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Amen 🀣🀣🀣🀣

$ 0.00
3 years ago

I can't remember the last time I wrote a story. Chai.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

You are opening the closed door now πŸ˜… Sha make it romantic πŸ™„

$ 0.00
3 years ago

She just fainted. It's hard to make it romantic. πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜‚ I wish I handled the part where they had sex πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£ details yen ma long gan πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£. I just finished the challenge now sef. Ko romantic rara πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜‚

$ 0.00
3 years ago

🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣 Chai! Olasquare is something else oo

Thank God you didn't handle it from where you had wanted because you will end up making me be in the mood. Who I wan come go meet? πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

Sha write something at least πŸ˜‰

$ 0.00
3 years ago

πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜‚ I would have drove down to come and meet you o. Pressure must be relieved. Hahaha. I have written it and I will post it early tomorrow. I hope you will like it.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ Ta-daπŸ™Œ I can't wait to read from the romantic man himself. πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Hahahaha the event of the story left me no room for romantic gesture πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

$ 0.00
3 years ago

(Coughing) please I don't understand what's going on here. I hope it is not what I am thinking, let me wait patiently till tomorrow and see how it ends.

Hopefully, we can bring someone else into another continuity.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Hahahaha we've gotten a room already, so we won't corrupt your eyes.

I've been thinking of who to drag into it, really. I will drag Hanzell to it.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

$ 0.00
3 years ago

The room is waiting, dear. πŸ€£πŸ˜‚

$ 0.00
3 years ago

She was scared because she didn't want to be a victim of what Cole did, I felt bad for her honestly but something is just beyond our power.

Only if she waited for a little longer, she would have been the happiest woman in the world.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Nancy shouldn't have aborted the baby, but what if she die in the process of aborting the baby.

$ 0.05
3 years ago

She was scared, she thought she was used and dumped again but that decision was too harsh.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Woahhhh..the story got me pinned until the end. It a little bit disappointing that she had to abort the baby. She could have at least waited a few more days. Damn...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ this story is too good. I look forward to @oluwalium's continuation.

$ 0.05
3 years ago

πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

$ 0.00
3 years ago

I hope Olawalium accepts it though. She ought to have waited, that's where the twist came into the picture.

$ 0.01
3 years ago

Let's wait and see.

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Hahahaha see gobe πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜‚

$ 0.00
3 years ago

Man, this is almost seeming like a classical tragedy. I know it's hard to blame Nancy or George but this is exactly why people preach against premarital sex and abortion. Abortion, mostly. Nancy had no rights to take the life of her unborn baby since she had a voluntary sex with George. Really sad. Great story development, bro

$ 0.05
3 years ago

The situation of things is beyond their control, I had to twist the end so that there can still be a continuity of the story.

$ 0.00
3 years ago