Life is like anything

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4 years ago

Life is like a train,
As time goes on.

Life is like an ocean,
Whose edge is not found.

Life is like a flower bud,
As soon as it was born,
good luck began to spread.

Life is like a desert,
When in danger,
the water doesn't match

Life is like a tree,
Stick to the roots

Life is like a falling leaf,
At one point it fell off.

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The beauty and futility of life is always something magical, the part where you wrote at one point it will fall off really got me. This is a beautiful poem ❤

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4 years ago

Thanks dear for your complement.

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4 years ago

Very heart touching and beautiful poem. I always inspire people who write like you. I also like writing. You should make your words more touching and more rhythm need. But it's so beautiful poem Indeed. I like your writing theme. Wish you will do better in future. So take my upvote as a gift. ♥️

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4 years ago

Thanks dear for your admiration. It's means alot for me. As well as thanks for upvote.

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4 years ago

Keep writing. That'll make you more experienced . I think everyone should try writing poems and stories. It's really a way of spreading your feelings and knowledge among the people. In future , one day we will compete each other , I guess. He he he 😍

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4 years ago

A journey of life in a poem this is a good one❤

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4 years ago

Thanks for your praises.

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4 years ago

It's worth the praise

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