Psychopath (Part 1)

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Jim works as a forensic doctor a newly hired, they will check the corpse causes of their death right after the crime happens. He is kinda nerd, he wears thick glasses and a smart one, just like any other nerdy type people. Because of his nerdy appearance, some people find him weird, although he is really weird in many ways.

There's a girl named Lilly, she works at the same department as Jim. She finds it creepy and weird when she caught Jim staring at him. One day, she went to the files section room to get the victim's data, when she bumped into Jim who happens to be there too.

"Hi Lilly, what are you doing here?" Jim greeted her.

"Ahh, hmm I am getting data for the recent victim's file, haa how about you?", Stammering reply of Lily, shes kinda scared with him.

" Oh, I see. You look so beautiful today" Jim told her while making some weird gestures.

"Ah, really? Well... thank you, excuse me I have to go" Lilly said.

"Oh, that fast? hmm, can I invite you to have dinner with me tonight?" Jim asked politely.

"Hmm, sorry I am kinda busy tonight. Sorry" Lily said passing Jim hurriedly.

Lilly felt creepy, like "Oh my god, he is so weird asking me to have dinner when I didn't know him that much." After long hours of working, Lily is ready to go home. Outside the building, there was Rick waiting, Lily's boyfriend. Rick is a policeman.

Jim saw Lily out from work with Rick, he is following them secretly and silently. He saw them quarreling it seems they are arguing, and Rick grabs Lily's arm with force, then ride the car and left. He now concluded that Rick was Lily's boyfriend. Jim followed them. They reached the apartment. Jim silently listen and observe outside. He hears Lily's cry in pain. He knows, Lily is beaten by Rick. He never stepped in, instead, he starts the engine of his car and left.

In the morning, Jim saw Lily in the office shes kinda weak, 'maybe because she was beaten up yesterday '. He can't see any marks from the beating because Lily wore long sleeves and pants, in her face she wears makeup. He is just watching Lily from afar, he really likes the girl. His eyes are full of admiration when he is staring at her. It's a pity that she has already a boyfriend and a sadist. When Lily caught him staring he looks down, he seems doesn't have the courage to pursue her, after she declined him for having dinner and the way Lily looked at him, it seems she is afraid of him he is smart enough to understand it.

To be continued...

[AN] This will going to have 3-4 parts only. A short series.

P.S this is an entry to the @Ozzyy series writing story contest. Which is extended, it will end on September 19, 2020. If you like to participate, check out the link below.

https://read.cash/@Ozzyy/announcing-the-first-stories-in-series-contest-7e5210ac

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wow, nice story...you decided to change the story for your entry...and nice story line

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Wow. Lily judged Jim too easily. Maybe Jim has this intimidating look so Lily finds it creepy, lol.

I wanna rip Rick's head right now for being an abusive boyfriend. He isn't a man at all, lol. He has no balls. He shouldn't beat a girl. Lily should leave her behind.

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4 years ago

Good story😁 keep going on writing

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4 years ago

Great character development. I'm quite hooked, and I'll like to see where this is going.

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4 years ago

The story is interesting but we have to hear how it goes thanks

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4 years ago

Part 2&3 is out you can check it thanks.

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nc

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4 years ago

Wow

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4 years ago

Nice your arictical. Plz support me plz

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4 years ago

Yeah a busy routine.they daily know new crime method.they do keen work to emphasize every thing.they declear th victum and crimer

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Please subscribe me

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4 years ago

Nice story

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4 years ago

Beautiful story, sis. 😍 Can't wait for the 2nd part.

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4 years ago

Omoo, Jim is really weird, but he's not bad, he's just 😍 Excited much for the next chapter. May mangyayari kayang killing killing?

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4 years ago

Hehehe thank you 😁, wait for the next part. This is suspense πŸ˜†

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4 years ago

Suspense, so walang crime? I will definitely wait for it πŸ’ͺ

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4 years ago

Hahaha secret, I dont want to spoil. Charot πŸ˜†

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4 years ago

Anlaaaa, I'm so excited naa, when is the release of the next chapter? But Seriously? no crimey?

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4 years ago

You can be a novelist dear. Are you writing in Wattpad perhaps?.

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Thanks dear, I didn't write in Wattpad, but I am a reader of Wattpad before 😊

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