Emotional Scar

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This is a continuation of my freewriting story entitled "Scar", you can check it out to understand the story. I used freewriting techniques to narrate the story as I am thinking fast and able to construct my thoughts with the time limits rather than by just simply telling the story. Just click the link below.

https://read.cash/@Eybyoung/scar-a64bd1be

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After that incident, they never had the chance to be together again. The little boy just seeing the little girl apart, seeing her so lonely and being bullied because of the scar. The scar is a big issue in their country because their culture cares so much about skin temperament (China). The little girl becomes aloof and nobody wants to be with her playing, because she looks different before with the scar.

When that incident happened the teacher and school custodian went straight to the little boy's house to tell her mother, his mother is sicked that cannot able to go to school, her mother's ill-got worsen upon hearing what happened. As the teachers and custodians ask the boy what really happened he told them "It wasn't me", " Then how about the girl? is she with them? ask the teacher. "Yes, she's with them", he replied. He denied what happened because he was coward and afraid of consequences might have, the teachers believe what he said because he is silent and behave well in the class they never thought of him lying.

The girl's family began to be in chaos, both her parents keep quarrels about what happened to her, they keep fighting and blaming each other's negligence. They end up in divorce. The girl's life turns upside down, her self-esteem vanished due to her scar. Despite that, she managed to finish her study and endured all the hate and insult she received from the people around her. The scar is the cause of her misery, the emotional scar is what she suffered a lot the most, and the past two years in her present life she experienced something that is different in her, psychologically as she turns into a different person.

To be continued.......

Device: Mobile Phone

Timer: Mobile Phone

Grammarly: Running

Promt: The title

Edited: after 10 minutes for some glitches

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i was enjoying reading article

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4 years ago

did you read the first one too?

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no....i will now

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A freewrite doesn't work like this. If you write you write for 10 minutes about a topic and if the time is up you quiet.

It's not what you do. You do not pick a prompt and write 10 minutes but you write a review and simply cut it in parts of 10 minutes.

In this case, you can better write e review and post it under reviews.

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