Talk about Alcohol..
Hello everyone, it's Dangerous_Fly once again on this .**. My FreeWritimg challenge .. Second entry.** Prompts used : perplex, support,charming, ashes, release, Prompt missed: worm. **Prompt information added after time out as well as introduction. THANK YOU** Let's dive in.. Mostly I go to the bar with my friends to play snooker. At such places you will see a lot of people trying to prove their worth by taking in alcohol to show they are the men. I took a chance to ask one of them about it and he told me he always has a **perplex** feeling whenever he takes it. He continued to brag about it's importance when I tried convincing him. Although it has importance, this shouldn't be something people should be in **support** of. Some say it has a **charming** power that moves them on but it actually causes them the harm of shattering and burning their future into **ashes** .. They have to realize this early to **release** them from future troubles and suffering. This was what I told him. Thank you. **Note : It is completely fiction.** Device used: Mobile Timer used : Mom's phone Start : 18:02 GMT End : 18:12 GMT Translation :No
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she said people and perplexed are not prompts... im confused
I know . I feel you. Kaya mo yan . Di ka nag iisa. Pag ikaw nanalo huwag ka sanang makakalimot suportahan daka dear ππ
Ok but always put it in English. I had to translate it
haha kaloka ka sis ahahahaha
Upon further notice it is part. She says I is rather perplex but grammarly changes it to people
This is what she commented on my article: "People is not a prompt you can remove it we have 6 prompts only. Be aware Grammarly changes perplex into people!" Then I asked: Thanks!! so perplex and people is not prompts? She answered: Exactly! π Here's my article so you can see the comment. https://read.cash/@Jdine/how-drunk-people-act-1st-entry-fe3f53b7
Your article sounds like youre Africanππ Snooker is my sport Man but too many influence around crowd
I am indeed an African but the article is fiction. It just came up
Ohh you good at this.. I almost felt like we had the same parentsπππ
you have good knowledge on writing. You prove that again. I like your article all the time.
Thank you for that
Your writing skill is awasome. I have a lot to learn from you. Thank you again for this article.
You can ask me for help of you need some . I am forever available
I though this will be a long article coming from @Dangerous_Fly and I was wrong though it worth to read. Such a short time and he manage to make a good article. ππππ Let's see the third article.
This is a competition and it doesn't require writing it down but you think while writing, this makes it difficult to write more and also you have to make use of the prompts
It came out short for you as well
Oh my. You just made it easy!
Very nice article. ..π
Fi tion or not it sounds very realistic to me which is great. The one asked already lost his vision to reality or is a narcissist (he most likely is and you better keep him out of your life). π