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@Charlotte 28 July 2020 edited more from that month

Grim

*Eyes are often closed.* *Left in history of thoughts,* *Half of me is lost.* *Gun shots I still hear,* *Continuos feeling of fear,* *Thinking you are near.* *Shout for liberty,* *Independence now we see,* *But noise won't leave me.* Thank you for reading❤ Writing a Haiku is idea of @CrazyInsane , you can also share yours, let's us write more poems❤ I'm not that confident with this one but I hope I did it right this time😅 it's been a long time since I wrote a Haiku🤧 ______________________________ You can check profile of @glossyberrycraze , though she's busy because of some worksheets I know she'll get back in track. She published her first article and it's good❤

12 comments

@kFatema 28 July 2020

Beautiful bro
@Yayaya13 28 July 2020

Wow😍 deep and meaningful
- @Charlotte 28 July 2020
  
  Thank you for reading it😊
@mooontivated 28 July 2020

Great Poem
- @Charlotte 28 July 2020
  
  Thank youuu
@heartbeat1515 28 July 2020

The moment before the war that leaves traumatic memories and the loss of someone dear because of the war. I have not read a haiku for a while and this is the feeling of reading one. Nice 👍 I will have a look at the account that you suggested.
- @Charlotte 28 July 2020
  
  Thank very much, appreciating it means a lot to me🤗 Thank you for checking her profile, she's new but i see her articles as short but full of feelings and creativity❤
  - @heartbeat1515 29 July 2020
    
    I prefer her to write like the first article she wrote. The poems are too short, shorter than a haiku. The layout of her current articles is filled with italic words and hard to read for me.
    - @Charlotte 29 July 2020
      
      I guess the short ones pop out of the feelings it is more like a quotation but i feel the emotions but yeah we have different styles and as a reader we have diff perspective, thank for reading her article. She's still new in the platform i think she can do about the italicized words if she want. @glossyberrycraze you can read his/her opinion i know you're welcome of suggestions❤
      - @heartbeat1515 29 July 2020
        
        I like her writing. She needs to write like her first article in my opinion, to differentiate her from scammers.
    - @glossyberrycraze 29 July 2020
      
      hello, thank you for sharing your thoughts. 😊 i'm still new to this platform so allow me to be better 🤗
      - @heartbeat1515 29 July 2020
        
        No problem at all. Your writing is good. I like your first one.