Vengeance of the Last Rat

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A windy and cold evening readchamps! I'm a bit under the weather lately because I am having a mild headache, and I'm losing my appetite because of that.

Without any further ado, let us just disregard that matter and allow me to share this short fictional story of mine (originally written by me❣️). Hope you like it!


Vengeance of the last rat

One day, there was a pregnant mother rat. She's carrying her about to born little babies in her belly. During her labor, she was having a hard time to excrete them. Fortunately, she had a successful delivery and was able to bore three healthy little baby rats. And they look so adorable.

Everyday, the mother rat was looking for food for herself. So that, she could feed her cuties a good milk for a couple of weeks. Her little rattys was dearly loved by her.

Years passed by, her babies are growing older, and they are ready to find food for themselves. However, their mother was against to it. The Mom Rat brought them bread and rotten meats everyday. They keep on eating the same food regularly. Bread..rotten meat...bread again... Until such time, her kids won't eat such food any more. They keep on squeaking and making noises. The mother understood what they are whining of.

As she was staring at her kids, she gained might and courage. She came up with a plan to enter and sneak to a nearby bakery shop. For the reason that the good smell and tempting aroma of the baked goods captured their interest to sneak in . She said "Squeak, there's nothing a Mama cannot do for her child, squeak!". She immediately move her way in and went straight to a narrow hole.

From the moment she entered the bakery shop, her eyes was pinned in those yummy and mouthwatering breads, but there are lot of humans around. She doesn't have a chance to grab one. She continually moved from one place to another and hide until she smells something way more tempting!

Sniff* sniff* "What is this smell? Squeak!" She saw a cheese from a distance. "Wow! It's my first time to saw a cheese! squeak! My kids would love definitely love these!" When quickly bit the cheese and took it without a second though, little did she know that it was a mouse trap. Pull* Pull* then clang!! She was hit by the trap. The poor mother's tears fell on the ground while biting the cheese on her mouth and died. Poor thing🥺.

Her kids was so hungry and began to worry because their mom was not yet around. So they decided to follow where there mama is. They entered the same hole where their mama went until they reached the bakery.

They hid and looked for their mother, and unfortunately they saw saw the heinous death of their beloved mother. They cried and cried while while embracing their Mom's cold body.

Mama..squeak! Squeak!". Out of the blue, a hungry cat was watching over behind them and was waiting for a perfect time to hunt and kill them.

The cat nabbed them off guard and bit one of them while the other one was caught using it's sharp claws. Two rats died on the spot. And there's only one left. He rushed and ran fo his life. The last rat of the family was filled with sadness and fury. He became desperate. And wanted to retaliate against the cat and human.

The last rat went back to the bakery and squeaks in the middle of the floor. The rat finally came.. Grahahahahah! "Another One!" The evil persian cat immediately jumps towards the small rat. The small rat just closed her eyes, and got eaten by the cat.

"Tssk! Foolish small rat. But it's delicious..grahahaha!" in just few minutes, the persian rat went dizzy and debilitated. "The h*ck is this? I'm losing consciousness! Did that rat brought up a poison?" Arrhhhgg!

The cat died in a couple of hours. He didn't noticed that the small rat put a bunch of poisonous pills on it's ears and in mouth.

When the owner noticed his dead cat. He yelled! And cried! His expensive kitty was now dead.

That's how the last rat avenged the death of his family.

"If I'm desperate there's nothing I cannot do."

-The last rat


Closing Thoughts

There you have it guys! I hope you like this lame childish story of mine. Anyways thanks for dropping by. Likes, Tips, and Comments are well-appreciated.

Special thanks to Kuya @gwapojohn , sissybels @Bloghound , and to all my sponsors who I forgot to mention, thank you again for renewing your sponsorships! God bless you all abundantly and bountifully.

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You're welcome! 😊Kapag nabasa to ng gf ko malulungkot yun. Pati kasi daga naawa sya pati baboy pero kumakain naman ng lechon 🤣

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2 years ago

This is a nice fictional story, is there gonna be a second part???

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2 years ago

Thank you so much sis, I'm glad you like it but theres no second part hehe❣️😁

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2 years ago

Bat oarang ako pa naawa sa picture 😅 I meanz may alaga akong daga before and maganda sya, maganda sila alagaa. Lalo na if mula pagkababy nila tas sayo lumaki. Di sila nagiging wild. Ayun lang matagal naeon hehe

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2 years ago

I used to have white mice pet din noon sis pero kinain ng pusa ng kabitbahay namin huhu bata palang ako nun. Hays haha kawawa sila nu? Kahit pinandidirihan sla ng mga tao kagaya rin natin sla naghahanapnng paraan para makasurvive.

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2 years ago

Beautiful story

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2 years ago

Thank you very well-appreciated ❣️

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2 years ago

Ang sad lang ng naging kapalaran nila. Kahit mapaminsala sila nakakaawa din naman sila ee. Kahit mahilig sila magngatngat ng damit ba 😥

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2 years ago

Opo ate ruff I used to have a white mice pet when I was a kid ate ruff pero kinain ng lintik na pusa ng kapitbahay namin huhu. Nakakaawa sla sobra kahit pinandidirihan sila.

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2 years ago

Ang cute naman po nga fable na ito!

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2 years ago

Hehe thank you po🥰

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