Unexpected (2)

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After my birthday, Jessica become nice to me. She always try to talk to me and have a little conversation. One day Jessica asked me to to our homework together. I agree because I want to be with her. We went to a coffee shop and ordered some coffe and snacks. We didnt copy our answers but we teach each others how to get the answer and check our answer if we got it right. Until I cannot control myself, I asked her about something.

"Uhm, hey Jessica. Can I ask something?" I said.

"Yeah. What is it?" She responded

"Can I court you? Uhm, dont be offend. And please dont change because on what I asked to you. Its okay if you reject I just want to know if its okay" I asked her with a lower voice

Im really shy. My heart beats faster and faster, it was my first time to ask this for a girl thats why I really dont know what should I do then.

"I do-dont know." Jessica answered With a sad face

"Why? Is there a problem" I asked.

"No, I just dont want to leave a person once its not working. Im afraid of leaving anyone thats why Im not making friends to other except you. Your so kind and always their to help Im so thankful to have a friend like you but I dont know." She said.

"O-okay. Dont feel sad" i smile "lets continue our homework. Im so sorry for asking you that"

"Dont feel sorry. Please dont change" Jessica request

Months pass, Jessica becomes always absent and always go home early. She didnt even talked to me. One day, I followed her. I saw Jessica went to a hospital. I though she's going to visit a family member or friend. But she walked inside the doctors office. I waited for almost an hour until she comes out. After that I approached the doctor and ask.

"Good afternoon Doc. Can I ask something?" I asked

"Do you have an appointment?" The doctor said

"No, but my friend the one that enter here before. I just want to know why did she go here?" I ask again.

"Oh, Jessica? she's your friend. Okay, it is the first time I heard that. Jessica, she's my patient for almost 5 years. She has a heart problem, and I am shocked because you introduce yourself as her friend because she told me once she dont want to make friends or have any emotion felt. Because extreme happiness and sadness makes her heart hurt. Jessica, have a check up on me because shes not feeling good these past few weeks. She told me that, there a person that is very important to her. Shes feel very sorry to that person. She cant tell what is her situation" Doctor said.

I was shocked because Jessica has no other friends than me. I asked the doctor when did she start to felt that. Tha doctor said maybe 3 months ago. And then, I remember that was the time I confess to her. I tell the doctor about what happen. And the doctor tell me something about Jessica's situation.

"Okay, James right? I know she told me what happen. And I want you to know Jessica has only 1 year left. She might die any day or any time because of her weak heart. Jessica will be saved if theres a donor. But unfortunately, we didnt see any compatible and available heart donors.

To be continue.....

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Thank you!Nice article.

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interesting story indeed....keep it up dear...I'm waiting for the next part

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Nice, nice, continue dear... 😊

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Nice article

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😭

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Face The Situation Fearlessly Nd Soon Thr Will Be No Situation 2 Face.

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I had a lot of fun reading your story but I was very sad. You have presented the story in a very beautiful way. It's very amazing story

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Your story is very nice but I cant help it if I get annoyed (a little bit) because it was cut off intentionally. Maybe your strategy for more views but I hope the next part will be have its light (end).

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Sorry im out of space thats why I cut it that way

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Never the less it was quite a story im looking forward to the continuation..

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Okay. Sorry for that. I admit it im not good in making stories so thanks for your feedback its my first time to create a story on my own

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The ending is not cohesive or out of story line. As if you are trying to end fast the story according to what the readers want. A happy ending. So who is the person that she replaced with the male lead? Dont mind me Im just voicing my observation. Way to go for a newbie writer. Congratulations.

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Did you read it carefully? Its okay i want to have your comments but maybe your way on giving a feedback is not good. Try to understand what is in the story.

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No offense meant. I understand the story it was great. It was a consctructive criticism✌️

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Yeah I know. But your feedback cant motivate a writer.

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Sori✌️

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It Is Better F0r Us T0 Feel Bad Rather Than T0 Make 0thers Feel Bad.

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