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the story of a brutal man...

she was running without looking forward and often look back to the man who was chasing her ..she was running in hurry when she suddenly collide with Ali.. she requested him to save her from the man in black dress and muscular body,who was chasing her..

Ali put his coat over her and stand in front of the girl pretending like he is his guard.the man who was chasing the girl stop following and go back, it was dark night Ali offered the girl to come with him as she may have no option to go anywhere in such a dark night..

she agreed with thanks as she said she cannot go anywhere in such darkness and that she stay with him till tomorrow and move on then. she moved toward the car where Ali pointed. his mind was full of thoughts when he saw the girl with lusty eyes.he was full of lust.he took the girl to his home. he offered her some food and asked about her but she refused by saying she is much depressed right now and can't say anything so will tell tomorrow..

he offered her a room that was towards much inner side of the house. this was the room where several girls come before in the name of girlfriend or getting married with him.

though he was planning something but try to pretend to b a pious and kind to her so that she could not know about his plans..

he take the girl to the room and ask her to sleep without any fear but when he was leaving the room she asked Ali not to go as she was frightened so that she did not wanted to sleep alone.

she suggested that he could sleep on a bed while she will take sofa to sleep. this was very helpful for Ali to fulfill his goal so he become glad to hear the suggestion of the girl and agreed.

later in the mid night a car stopped near the door of the house with the same man driving the car who was chasing the girl before.. the girl come out of the house with a bloody knife sit in the car while telling the man 'the story of another brutal man comes to an end'..

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Intrusting story 😍..Good.. try your own ideas

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Good,, try to improve the idea

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The story isn't bad at all but the grammar deserves more attention. No capital letters if you start a new sentence, words not written completely. I suggest you let the tool Grammarly check it or edit it yourself. The way it is now it can't be accepted in the community (short) stories/Tales.

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thanks for your precious suggestion;)

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