@z_graeden
The Blind
The world's beauty I long to behold Like to distinguish colors I was told Wished to hold those cotton clouds they say rushed in the sky big and proud. The light I could barely see; sight was deprived from me. I like to sit at night at the park, love the sweet singing of the lark. But why does the world seems too chaotic? Have you no eyes to foresee, what is coming to be? You seem more pathetic than me. yes,sight I may have not yet can see thru my heart. you said am a burden, your thoughts are more of a villain. Through the darkest of the night I cry not of my loss of sight. my heart goes more to you who has lost sight of what is true an entry on @Dolores giveaway for mechanins pls refer to this link https://read.cash/@Dolores/my-first-ever-giveaway-join-earn-and-improve-879c7319
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Yay! What a dramatic poem.. Carry on!
sulat sulat ng mga random thoughts.I thought napublish q before I slept but did not pala,buti na lng maagang nagising pra mauplod ang image
This is our routine.. An internet connection chaser🤣
I love your poem😍 it's full of emotions plus the message is indeed tells us about a blind who see tru his heart and how those who can see but kept their eyes close and be blinded by other things. 🤗 Just wondering about the dots or bullets tho.😄
never mind the dots😊 I dont know how to write without those big spaces so i tried to use that
Hmm I think you can enter twice po para mawiden ang space hehe, suggestions lang😁
yep,thanks ginawa q na dun sa mga past poems😊
Glad to hear that😁
who has lost sight of what is true but continue living, because it's all that I knew Another poem that is dramatic and full of emotions. Keep it up😍 Best of Luck
thanks for the support😇
The blind can't see the beauty of the world. You described the emotions beautifully in your poem. Keep it up dear.😊
a blind might not see the beauty of the world but they are more sensical about whats happening around rather than the one blessed with eyes to see..😊